|Reviews for Magic of the Force|
| Anon19740 chapter 1 . 18h
Keep it coming, one of the few stories on this site that isnt crap
| master of death12345 chapter 1 . 9/27
I'm only on chapter six but did harry make his lightsaber or is he using one of dookus or something?
| Mac55 chapter 21 . 9/17
Love the idea, but this has gotten so long winded. I cannot enjoy it anymore. Goodluck
| Toa IceHeart chapter 13 . 9/11
Is Ventress’s Sith name Charon or Noctis?
| RyMalice chapter 21 . 8/23
Any chance of this one getting updated again?
| Guest chapter 21 . 7/30
It will be interesting to see what happens on earth, when Harry's name is released as the 4th and/or 5th tri-wizard champion (could be either, could be both; depending on if dumbles stubbornly needs Harry "for the greater good" or changed to "back up plan longbottom", and whether or not one of Voldie's agents also got Harry's name in).
Then there's how the magic will react. Is Harry far enough spatially/temporally to "not exist" causing whoever placed the name in to be nominated instead? Does the Tyrant's Bane suddenly appearing in orbit, alerting the UN Spacy (SGC, UNIT, Plumbers, or whichever organisation monitors off-world activities) then causie the British MoM and/or dumbles to potentially get blamed by the ICW for (in)directly shattering the statute of secrecy?
| wiebenor chapter 21 . 7/5
I don't know if reading progress is shown to the author, or if there's any true benefit to reading it online or in app, so if there is, please forgive me, as that's just something I generally hate doing, as I prefer to use either Calibre (or Google play books on mobile)... Just wanted to let you know that although I know NOTHING outside of what I see in the (9?) Star wars movies, it appears to be well written and researched, and I'm eagerly waiting for a new chapter release on this. Oh, in case you're wondering, I saw nothing wrong in this chapter, as far as story goes; seriously, I know authors complain how chapters aren't up to their standards because they didn't have the ambition or had writers block, but I saw nothing like that here, the writing was generally clear and understandable, with almost NO spelling or grammatical or sentence structure errors, so kudos to you and all your beta readers for all your good work creating a truly engaging story you just can't put down (well, I guess I can now, since I'm finished with what you have uploaded, but you get what I'm saying) I forget if I did that yet, but if I'm not yet, I'm definitely following AND favoriting this, as of now...
| Kraut007 chapter 4 . 7/2
Usually Im not a fan of Harry Potter Star Wars Crossovers but this one is really good so far.
No Sith Harry or Harem Harry but instead a story where Jedi Harry explores the Expanded Universe of the Prequels. Since I love the old "Republic" comics by Dark Horse, its a joy for me to read an AU story, where many of the characters and storylines from this universe play a more important role. Agreed, Aurra Sing is a bad case of plot armor und seeing Jabba dying much earlier is satisfying. Also, fair critique on the Jedi order, especially for turning a blind eye to slavery and being callous on what missions they send their youngsters. Cant wait to read more.
| wiebenor chapter 5 . 7/1
All I can say is holy shi-... I mean, wow, I have seen the Force brought into Harry Potter stories, a time or two, looking for an unfinished story I wanted to find again, (y'know, lily being "not from around here", and marrying James, or having some mysterious ability from school no one knows about except McGonagall, then obviously Harry gets it later) but for Harry Potter to be brought into a Star wars story, in this manner that's different from what I've seen, well, I just wanted to say WOW! The research it must have taken to try to blend an actual Star wars story with just changing one character or adding one character and the dedication to try and be able to meld all that together, it's just astonishing, and I cannot wait to finish whatever of this story is published, the reason I qualify my statement like that is because a lot of Harry Potter stories, especially the more complex ones, tend to end up not being finished so I hope this is finished but I just I'm into it so much and I didn't want to read forward to the end without reading the rest of the story it's just that good...
My kudos and thanks go out to the author who made this story possible and who made it as brilliant as it is so far in like the fifth chapter or wherever I'm at currently... Thanks again, and I certainly hope that you in the future can keep up this level of quality in your research and writing, as I have read these obnoxiously long chapters and found very very few problems in the way of grammar and or writing that I just don't know enough even having watched all the movies and what not, whether one word or another is a word that is misspelled or if it's indeed how would be said written and or pronounced in the Star wars universe...
One last thought that I have, is that I certainly hope that if Harry Potter does have to go back to his own universe, he gets to take The girl with him, and of course being it's a semi Love story feeling story at the moment, I definitely hope that there's you know all the lovey dovey and sharing the forest sharing the bed sharing the everything kind of stuff that goes on in a lot of stories for Harry Potter is the sort of main character even if it says weird as Harry Potter transferring to the, uh, Star wars dimension I guess you'd call it?
Anyway, thanks again for such a great book or story or whatever and again, I hope that the story greatness continues through the story until hopefully it concludes with the guy getting the girl and defeating evil and so on and so forth. definitely worth following, and I think I'm going to favorite the story as well
| N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 2 . 6/29
Emotion, yet peace.
Ignorance, yet knowledge.
Passion, yet serenity.
Chaos, yet harmony.
Death, yet the Force.
I think Harry is going to bring back taking this Oath for the Jedi.
| gryphan.master900 chapter 1 . 6/26
Wow okay so this chapter is probably like 30-40k words so I guess I'll go with number points.
1. It's great. 2. You need to edit it. 3. Wow Dumbles is a monster here and so is his family. It was hard to read. 4. I like how you've done the Jedi so far in our tiny glimpse of them. I'm hoping you end up making the order less ludicrous as well .
| Skaeger chapter 7 . 6/14
I really hate that I only realized this was gonna turn into a harem a third of the way through. Such a shame. The story was fairly good too.
Yes there were signs, but up till now it was "just looking" and not "oh I'd love to share you with other women" trash
| Fredward1 chapter 19 . 6/9
So if Harry can just forcefully teleport someone without having to touch them, wouldn’t that be a really good tactic to use against force sensitives like ventress? Imagine they are about to fight and he forcefully teleports her a few feet. Maybe does it incorrectly where her hands are gone? Or maybe he does a side along apparation that results in the same thing? It would be devastating to just lose her hands that way or if he just does it right, she’d be on the floor vomiting her stomach out.
| Fredward1 chapter 13 . 6/7
You know what I never understood so far? If they knew that the sith is playing both sides and that one side was literally a Sith Lord, Hugo, then why didn’t they immediately assume that the other side had to be from the senate? Someone able to influence both sides? It should’ve been obvious
| Fredward1 chapter 8 . 6/6
Wait if the veil only covers the known galaxy, wouldn’t fay be able to see the future clearly outside of it?