Reviews for Because I Love You - Chasing After You
NoNameUchiha chapter 31 . 5/2/2021
This was a nice breather chapter after the many fights.
Guest chapter 31 . 5/2/2021
During the scene Where Naruto and Hinata where talking in the garden...
Neji: Hiashi-Sama why are you suddenly sharpening the family sword...
Hiashi: I don’t know, but I sense a... Disturbance... close by...
GBAboy313 chapter 31 . 5/2/2021
huh, a Neji pre-development who is able to actual somewhat get along with and treat Hinata with some respect. I never thought I would see something like this. Maybe she managed to earn some respect from Neji.
the development with Hiashi and Neji might lay the groundwork for Neji to begin developing into his Shippuden self without needing the Sasuke Retrieval Arc and his fight with Kidomaru as soon as Naruto kicks his ass.
Though I have to admit that I'm not sure if Sasuke Retrieval will even happen.
NaruHina goodness is always welcome in my book. I'm hoping they get together in the aftermath of the war rather two years later here. Though I do appreciate the Naruto Shippuden Ultimate Ninja Storm 4 base Adventure mode campaign where its Sakura trying to get Hinata and Naruto to get together right after the war but fails in getting them together as a couple yet she does bring them closer and lay the groundwork for the eventual getting together of the two as a couple.
So Anko was experimented on with the Bloodline Experiments. Explosion Release, perhaps?
Ahh yes, Danzo's Danzo-ing. Makes you want him dead that much more.
Nothing else for me to add, I need to run.
Great Chapter, and keep up the good work.
Until Next Time:
Stay Safe and Stay Healthy!
SEE YA LATER!
yeaaaahhhh I read chapter 31 . 5/2/2021
Welcome back
quite an enjoyable chapter my man.
We got training details for team 7 and Neji development.
Guest chapter 31 . 5/2/2021
So no Captain Yamato then if Anko has wood release.
An enjoyable chapter that is able to incorporate earlier plot points. I can not wait for the training chapters.
NarHina chapter 31 . 5/2/2021
Yes Naruto's training is going to be great now that Hinata is joining in and all the teasing Jiraiya will do as well wonder if Naruto will start to realise more about how he feels about Hinata.

Like the changes you made to Anko's back story and looking forward to what the so called bloodline limit she got from the experiments is.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
panjangya chapter 31 . 5/2/2021
Finally an update wooo
Well worth the wait
RenegadeSon chapter 30 . 4/25/2021
The wait was definitely worth it! Fantastic chapter to be honest. I think this was the best alternate Chunnin exam that I've read. It was for sure the best Neji vs Hinata fight that I've read. You have a gift! I'm really interested to see how this turns out. I'm ready to experience how Naruto and Jiraiya's relationship will turn out. Also, the Sakura and Kurenai situation is compelling. Well done. Finally kudos on showing how Hinata got better but still showing the prowess of Neji simultaneously. I can't wait for the next chapter.
panjangya chapter 30 . 4/22/2021
Damn the character growth is amazing!
Now waiting for update...
NouvelleVoix chapter 5 . 4/18/2021
I'm really enjoying this fic so far, but I am *highly* concerned about Kurenai telling Sakura her role is probably to be emotional support for Naruto and Sasuke. That's really, really, *really* fucked up.

Quote 1:
"With that being said, let's focus on Sakura. Let me ask you something," Kurenai pointed at the girl, "do you understand what your role in Team 7 is?"

Quote 2:
"Kakashi is focusing on polishing the basics with you three, and this project aside, I agree with him. This will only be a problem if you stagnate, so try thinking on what kind of kunoichi you want to be and discuss this with Kakashi as often as you can," Kurenai suggested. "Still, what I mean to say is this: Your role, is to support your teammates. Both on the field and out of it."

Quote 3:
"Our profession isn't nice to us… you'll do and see things you never wanted to, that will keep you awake at night and even haunt you in nightmares. We need support from other people to help us keep going. Sakura, you have a family and you've led a normal life, but the same can't be said about Sasuke and Naruto."

Naruto fanon and canon are absolutely full of examples of Sakura being little more than the team cheerleader. It is by far the trope I hate the most. Judging by your level of writing, numerous edits, and seemingly complex characters, I can assume that you're probably not going down that path, but the whole passage where Kurenai talks to Sakura had a ton of red flags. If your intention wasn't to suggest that Sakura would be responsible for managing the guys' emotions, you might want to rewrite that section. (And if it was, I'll probably find out a few chapters from now and drop this fic, but I don't think that's the case.)
TheLateReader chapter 1 . 4/16/2021
The amount of detail in this unfathomable. I can't believe it that I understood it and it's so good. I had to reread it because I also felt the anticipation that Kurenai had towards the project. i can't believe I'm only finding this now!
Guest chapter 25 . 4/10/2021
It’s great to finally see Sasuke’s thought process on Naruto’s strange ability
Guest chapter 20 . 4/9/2021
This was good
Wishtobesomeone2021 chapter 1 . 4/9/2021
Please update soon.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/9/2021
This is a fun story
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