Non-canonical matchups for battles. Yet everything goes to complete a beautiful exciting picture

Cool genin fights! Even the reinvented ShikaTem was nice

What a rich history! After all, even the exams are very particular in your fanfiction

I like how you put it, our team of 8 genins here

This is too good for you to let it die.

Wow, Kurenai is a massive c*nt, can't wait for her to kick the bucket hopefully

Hi! I'm from Brazil too!
Bom, falar português q é bom né? Kkkk
Essa é uma das melhores fics q já li, espero que vc volte a escrever... mesmo sabendo que ela n estava completa, e possivelmente morta eu não consegui parar de ler
POR FAVOR VOLTAAAA kkk

*muttersUselessness says what?”

I mean, there are actually two I’s (sh I nob I squad)

I loved this chapter , it's nice to see the events that happened right after the second exam, and see what happened with everyone, and I love more Hinata and her gradual development!
I liked Shikamaru and Hinata's discussion and I would like to see more of them as a team, or even a team with Shikamaru Hinata and Naruto , it would be so compelling. And please , I would like more Shikamaru and Naruto friendship and how they started to hang out together with Chouji back in their academy years .
Danzo and Orochimaru secret meeting is really a bad thing... _ｏ

And again , I liked how closer the team konoha are here, as they were so happy to see Naruto, while Hinata is shy and worrywart.
Oh Did Naruto found out that Hinata and Kiba nearly died ? (as there are chapters after this)

I see where are you going with the last part of the chapter, with Hinata by his side and supporting him, Naruto will confide to his team members and Sasuke has no reason to be antagonist as he will see Naruto confinding to him a step closer to his change for the better and he will stay, and it's a way to defeat the curse of hatred of their past lives.
And awww , Hinata, and Naruto, I am so gushing.

So intense chapter that I had to read it twice, Hinata and Shikamaru early team up in part One is so interesting , no... compelling is the right word, as I usually read about them teaming up as older adult,, like in blank period and after it .
And Hinata that doesn't like him is an interesting detail .
And the change of cursed Sasuke attack , is interesting , I was expecting for Sakura to appear and the alternate version of that canon scene, though Hinata being the one to stop Sasuke by blocking his chakra poinst is a clever move.

I love that Naruto is slowly knowing Hinata and worried about her .

Hello , I will review here the three chapters that I read for obvious reasons. Chapter 24th ; I loved the part with Hinata getting to know better other members of team 10, and is so sweet and amusing that Ino and Chouji understood what is she doing involuntarly but herself
And I am always here for more Naruhina moments after the test
I love how close they became.

Chap 25th; This chapter started well, I get happy everytime i read Team 7, 8 and 10 being cooperative and have amazing team work
And It's interesting that you wrote about Sasuke being concerned for Naruto reaction if he kills someone, I hope that you focus on this later...
and finally here Naruto meets Karin, I hope that they find out they are cousins and become friends...and I hope that Karin will be more nicer already here.
And you are setting the conflict between Naruto and Sasuke better than in the canon.
The team 8 fight against Kankuru is good as they were strong enough to battle against him , I get worried everytime dark Gaara ( before he turned good) appears, I hope that He and Hinata become friends later, and here , Gaara nearly killed Hinata and Kiba was so scary , I don't you if you brought it up later, though I think that it will be really heartbreaking for Gaara later when he became friends with Her and Kiba , that he nearly killed her when he was was dark.

Chap 26th; Compelling chapter, the changed events are really good, I liked everything you wrote, from Hinata's discussion with her team members to the fight with Orochimaru.

I forgot to say in the previous chapter, It's clear that Sakura and Naruto 's interactions are taking the sibling like direction which I so approve, Naruto needs time to come to consider Sakura a sister, I liked how she helped him and teached him how to clean the appartment properly.

And I so love domestic Naruhina, with Hinata taking care of food and Naruto with cleaning they are so sweet.

Konohamaru and Hanabi becoming pranksters was so hilarious , though I see Hinata's point , Naruto thinking about Spotter Hinata that could have helped him with pranks was so amusing, I hope that it would be revisted later..maybe with Naruto and Hinata in a mission and he has to retrieve something and she is the spotter and he reminds her this.

...and Instead of Konohamaru calling Naruto boss, would be more better changing it in big brother or Ni'chan ? It will add the closeness that they have in the canon, and Naruto and Kono started to have the sibling relationship of big brother and little brother in later arcs.

And always I am for differentAlternate first meetings , which you wrote about with the SunaSand Team , so compelling.
I found interesting the part you wrote about Gaara noticing Naruto, like with Naruto's friendship with Hinata and the others , Naruto and Gaara friendship was overshadowed by all the Naruto, Sakura and Sasuke drama.

And I loved the part that about SakuSasu, Sakura and Sasuke got so close that they train together and hang out together without Naruto and Kakashi.

Hinata's monologue about her and Naruto is so well written , and I agree with it all the way.

I love Ayame , she is one of my favourite characters, sadly she is so underrated... she is the perfect older sister for Naruto...I hope that you will give her more scenes in the future
Again , you had written Naruhina moment and conversation so perfectly that I love it !
Sakura and Ino's heart to heart is so emotional and this "
if you are in a field brimming with beautiful flowers of so many different colors… how are you going to notice one little bud that has yet to bloom?" is so true!
I loved that you added the story of Ino having tried to befriend Hinata ...it adds something to the plot hole of Ino's childhood backstory of befriending lonely classmates...I always wondered why she didn't approach Hinata or if she did then and it wasn't shown ...
I'm happy that Ayame knows already about Naruto in here , I always wonder how she knew here as she was child when it happened...did she witness the event? oh then she knowing about it, she must certainly know about who are Naruto's parents , I would love sister Ayame and little brother Naruto interactions
and Iruka being concerned dad is so sweet , I love more dad Iruka and Naruto interactions!
This chapter is so carried well and compellng!

I loved the slice of life chapter of Naruhina Uzumaki family , so adorable and sweet and funny, I hope to read the part 2, I would love to read more Gaara , I hope that you will give him more interactions with Konoha eleven and become close friends with them , I didn't like that the canon made him to be always the last to know things.
When I read the first time , i missed this your Author Notes , and I realized that you have the story posted in Archive of our own, I looked for it , but I couldn't find it ...