|Reviews for Deprivation|
| Capox chapter 47 . 1/13
I normally don’t leave comments on stories that I read but I felt like I really needed to for you. I really love your writing and story telling but I am very disappointed in how you are portraying Renée in this story. It is very transphobic.
The way she is portrayed is very problematic and harmful to the trans community because it fuels unhealthy views and prejudices against how they actually live their lives. It is very disappointing because you have transferred your transphobia onto beloved characters in this story (Bella dead-naming Renee; refusing to acknowledge her name and pronouns) It is very apparent that you’ve never spent any time with a trans person or even aware of the struggles they go through on their everyday lives. Being transgender is not just a character trait, they are real people with real struggles and they are already villain-ized enough in real life that we don’t need works of fiction to further the hate.
I hope you would take time and do some research online about how marginalized trans people are in this world. Or better yet, expand your community and go befriend one or two, you’ll find that they are lovely people who aren’t two dimensional, jealous, ball of rage, hateful people like you have portrayed Renée.
| PearlyFox chapter 58 . 12/8/2019
| PearlyFox chapter 57 . 12/8/2019
There it is
| PearlyFox chapter 56 . 12/8/2019
Yes. Edward, what is that?
| PearlyFox chapter 54 . 12/8/2019
| PearlyFox chapter 52 . 12/8/2019
| PearlyFox chapter 51 . 12/8/2019
| PearlyFox chapter 50 . 12/8/2019
Fucking search your soul Bells!
| PearlyFox chapter 49 . 12/8/2019
Go Edward! Win back the girl!
| PearlyFox chapter 47 . 12/7/2019
Omg. First of all: I am so terribly sorry that I haven’t reviewed up until now but i got so wrapped up in this fic! It’s amazing. Thanks so much for writing xo
| cappcat chapter 1 . 12/2/2018
I loved this and I loved where you ended it! No need to do the 10 yrs later 2.5 kids and a dog thing. Thanks for writing!
| Mona69 chapter 67 . 7/27/2018
That truly deserved a follow up chapter. That mother was disgusting.
| Payton79 chapter 67 . 6/30/2018
I really loved this story. The whole sex club thing might just be your scene ;). Thank you so much for writing and sharing.
| Guest chapter 15 . 6/17/2018
OK, Renee is not bellas mom but a guy? Edward is sexually attracted to a GUY? WOW, that's kinda gross.
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/17/2018
Edward is sexually attracted to a 40 year old renee? Renee, as in BELLAS MOTHER? WTF?