Reviews for Forget Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh... I love this chapter 33 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter deserves all the claps and snaps. I could feel the emotions so intensely through it all, sooo well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw man r rollercoaster this chapter took me on! So well written |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww the bonding at the end! Love! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooooohhjjh curious and excitee to find out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story. The dates are off though. They broke into Gringotts after Easter weekend of 1998. The Final Battle was May 2, 1998. Other than that love this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, I understand why you had a prison breakout here- you wanted Lucius thrown in the mix, which I understand... But Bellatrix et al were broken out in 5th year - it was L plus the escaped death eaters that were at the battle of the ministry; that's kinda a big part of how Sirius died... Not only did B kill him herself, but it was because kreacher went to her that Harry was fed the lie about s being in the ministry in the first place. So l understand what you were trying to do with L, but doing it this way has created some mild continuity issues. Hope that helps! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just another little timeline correction: their 6th year started in 1996. Liking how this is all playing out so far though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just a little observation that the war ended in May 1998. So 2 years later would be October 2000. Love where this story is going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nice story!I liked the parallel with Hermione’s parents |
![]() ![]() god ive been bawling for the past hour |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it thank you for sharing this marvelous story. : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() The date here is wrong? The final battle took place on May 4th 1998, so this is dated after |
![]() ![]() Hermione's such an unlikeable b*tch, I can't even get through this. Does this stupid twat ever stop complaining about and judging everyone? Dumb whore. |