I read your story, and I must say I’m really impressed! I truly appreciate the depth and creativity of it, and I’d love to work on it. I’m excited to convert your story into a comic, and I’ve got some ideas that I think could enhance it. I’d love to discuss more about the story with you and share my thoughts!

Contact info:
Discord: amabeck
Best regard
Ama

really liked the romance of Blake and jaune here

Everything is fine except the weird thing you do with girls and Jaune, Blake cuddling someone she met the same day, in bed, in public? that's not very realistic. The way I see it you are just too horny to write a believable story.

Damn what a waste of a good story, sucks to see it end on a sour note. 11/10 amazing story, made me like blake since she isn't the sourpuss she usually is.

"I don't plan to abandon or delete anytime soon."

my heart goes out to the lost of a good story.

I've got a few things to get off my chest;
1. Your Grammar is stellar.
2. The formatting is readable major points for that.
3. The plot is magnificent!
4. You managed to Hook me right into this story and I finished it in one sitting. very hard to do as well so massive props for that. You make excellent use of tension, drama a dash of romance and angst.
5. it's well written and interesting, it draws your attention.
those are all the good points. Now the bad;
1. it's not finished
2. it's not been updated for 7 years and it's the only story GrimmCatcher has posted so you've either quit writing it, got the worlds worst case of Writer's Block, lost access to GrimmCatcher or heaven forbid died. reaaaaaly~ hoping it's NOT the last option.
3. it's only 11 chapters.
Overall I'd say it's a grand success 90/100.
that's all for now.
AN2469

Fic died before its time. hope it gets revived one day

Aww shit. I didn't realise it was last updated nearly 6 years ago.
Dammit.

Anyone know his other account? He says he has stories elsewhere

Hello author! I don’t know if you will read this comment considering his long ago this story was last updated. But I would like to say a few things anyway.

This is by far the best RWBY fanfic on this site. It is truly incredible and, while I’m sad to see it dropped, am very happy to have read what was written so far. Thank you for writing this story, and I hope you don’t let your creative talents be forgotten.

Thank you

God dammit why was this gold mine left uncompleted this was one of the hottest rwby stories I had ever read

Blake actually felt like not a shitty character and Pyrrha looked actually decided to try and get Jaune to notice her and his plight to try to not make it awkward felt like something that actually happens in real life

But tbh I always thought Nora was one of the hottest in rwby and that pond scene was just perfect and I was expecting a drunken Nora to be even better

A shame it's been abandoned 5 years ago...

'I've been fighting Grimm for 7 years yet I only have a Beowolf summon!' - Jaune Arc

Retarded

I like the character interactions, but not Roman. I can see him helping jaune for his own benefit, an investment, but those interactions are too...friendly. The characterization of Roman is WAY off

Another incomplete story that will never get finished. It’s pretty good all things considered. Jaune is a little out of character for what you made his backstory. I, personally, don’t care for criminal Jaune, but I get why he is.

This story is awesome! I would have loved to see where it went with more time. Thanks for sharing!