Reviews for Harry's Questions
daithi4377 chapter 4 . 12/13/2015
Pity it took so long to come to light but at least the Goblins and Amelia are moving fast. When will the will be read and please please don't have the toad as the High Inquisitor? I would love be to see Augusta Longbottoms or Andromeda as High Inquisitor for Hogwarts since neither of them will be under either Dumbledore or Voldemort or gets suckered in by Fudge.
doxiesmom14 chapter 4 . 12/13/2015
Awesome story and can't wait to read more. Just one little nitpicking thing a few times you wrote "trail" instead of trial.
daithi4377 chapter 3 . 12/13/2015
So is there a difference in how the Goblins are using Harry compared to Dumbledore using Harry. Granted the Goblins seem to be helping Harry but is it only for their benefit or do they really care for Harry? After that article about Harry's abuse how many if those store owners are going to accept the flu excuse for his skinny and pale appearance?
daithi4377 chapter 2 . 12/13/2015
Okay if Harry went to Diagon Alley with Hagrid on his birthday why is there only five days before school starts...shouldn't there be nearly a month from Harry's birthday to Sept. 1? Why didn't they do an inheritance test to determine what exactly Harry has? Wasn't Riphound the one that was stealing From Harry by Dumbledore and Slamclaw the healer?
daithi4377 chapter 1 . 12/13/2015
So all the money and accounts Riphound ripped off were they connected to Dumbledore as well?
desireejones99 chapter 4 . 12/13/2015
Excellent update
Spelling chapter 4 . 12/13/2015
To illegally take something from another person is to "steal" from them. Steel is a gray metal, which is used to make weapons (among other things) .
The reporter's name is Rita Skeeter; not Seeker.
Confusing names chapter 2 . 12/13/2015
You originally called the Potter account manager Riphound in the first chapter; and Slamclaw was the goblin healer at the beginning of this chapter. By the end of this chapter you were referring to Slamclaw as the account manger.
adenoide chapter 3 . 11/29/2015
I'm surprised about Harry's wand because it's the same from the book but in the book Harry has a horcrux and now Harry didn't have anymore the horcrux. I'm glad that Severus change his mind about Harry and about the way Dumby act with Harry.
adenoide chapter 2 . 11/29/2015
The goblins make a good job with Harry.
adenoide chapter 1 . 11/29/2015
I like the way how Harry is.
Darkafall chapter 3 . 11/28/2015
Rita Skeeter
skyefire chapter 3 . 11/28/2015
great story so far but Rita's last name's Skeeter not seeker.
bevfan2 chapter 2 . 11/1/2015
I think you meant Riphound in the last couple of paragraphs. Slamclaw is the healer. Good story, enjoying it
carick of hunter moon chapter 2 . 10/31/2015
To help you might find usefull and take a look at the profiles of gphoenix51, ARedHair & Kalen Darkmoon.
All told this is a good take on the clasic helpfull Goblins and it is working well as a story start, you got the basic idea and set up done.
The will, remember when it was written Peter was trusted so remember to take this in to account.
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