|Reviews for Abraxas|
| SailorChibi chapter 25 . 5/16
I enjoyed this story up to the point where Voldemort fell. After that it took a twist for the bizarre. I won’t argue your reasoning but it got a little too far fetched for me.
| Guest chapter 25 . 2/21
Well just finished the story. For all the talk of imagination, Harry and Ginny both really suck at using it, but then he was an idiot in canon too.
He never learned healing. Never futzed with the resurrection stone to, say, ask anybody for advice. Never used the darker magic even when the situation started calling for it. Hell, if the dumbass had mounted up on a broom with the incantation of Fiendfyre under his belt, he could have wiped out every land based military installment in britain within a few days, and if he got other wizards doing the same, the planet within a month or less. Oh and he forgot that tracking spells were a thing. And yes, even tracking spells that didn't require you to prepare them in advance. Remember 'Point Me' in Goblet of Fire? Arthur Weasley used Point Me to find someone. It's never used like that again because harry's retarded but fanfiction writers forget it too. (It was during the first portion of the book, I remember that much). And if he again has GODLIKE POWER... "Accio military sattelite." Since by this story he could actually cast spells just by imagining what he wanted, he could have made a bludger that could break the sound barrier that was in-freaking destructable, and had it target anything with a computer chip in it. He could have made hundreds of those. He could have cast a spell that'd create an EMP, and just portkeyed around the world and kept casting it until every goddamn computer on the planet was fried. He could have combined tracking spells as above, with apparition or portkeys or what have you, and assassinated every world leader within a night. A CONFUNDO and a GLAMOUR could have been used to get access to the location of every nuclear sub in a country. And silo, if he asked the right ruddy people. And neither of those spells are especially difficult on a target that can't fight back with magic.
But I digress. Rant aside, this is pretty much exactly canon-level Harry intelligence. He's a dumbass there, he's a dumbass here.
| Guest chapter 19 . 2/21
Ah, the impossibly competent big bad emerges. I swear people can't write a villain who isn't either omniscient or omnipotent until suddenly they're not.
| Guest chapter 18 . 2/21
PHENOMENAL COSMIC POWER
Still can't heal somebody. For all the talk of creation and light, all they've been shown to do is destroy.
| Guest chapter 17 . 2/21
PHENOMENAL COSMIC POWER... and they don't even try lifting the curse or healing Dumbledor. Or at least doing something for the pain.
WTF is wrong with them.
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/20
... I'm always sad to see Dumbledore suffer. It's always seemed to me like he does the very best with what he's given and what he could know. He makes mistakes, he overlooks possibilities at times yes, and he keeps appearing to gamble with lives, and yet the only one that's actually lost theirs because of his choices (other than quirrel who was already condemned) is Dumbledore's own life itself.
Everybody but him would have lived, had his desperation to see his sister again not won out in a moment of weakness.
| x2leoj chapter 3 . 1/13
Well that's just fucking twisted, there is no way Tom Riddle would have done that to Slughorn, almost made me stop reading. At the very least he would have killed him a lot earlier.
| Guest chapter 21 . 12/21/2017
Kill Hermione. PLEASE?
| Guest chapter 20 . 12/21/2017
| Guest chapter 19 . 12/21/2017
Is it because this bastard Mayer can’t use magic?
| FierceDeityLinkMask chapter 25 . 11/15/2017
This was a brilliant story. It made my emotions go haywire. I felt like praising you to high heavens at one point, and threatening you with hell fire at another. Any story that can get a rise out of my apathetic ass is a really good one. Thank You for writing that.
| everpresent chapter 25 . 10/6/2017
Interesting story. Definitely a dark turn after the end of Voldemort. Kind of hard to believe in the amount of power weilded by Mayer though, but I'll accept that for the sake of the story. But a bit of an unsatisfying ending. Just a bit abrupt.
| stylo1 chapter 22 . 9/23/2017
lol in your AN you reason just because in the books things dont add up it makes sence for you to do the same. im not against a story about war on muggles, but you've messed this up way to much.
the war started because kingsly told muggles they have a 16 year old wizzard with more power then seen before in history and then add that he has no problem killing and has done so many times. we dont know the strengt of wards but given references from DH hunderds of spells are needed to break down hogwarts, maybe not strong enough against a nuke but def against missiles
| stylo1 chapter 18 . 9/23/2017
why exacly does voldemort go looking for the diadem first thing after he enters hogwarts. makes no sence at all
| stylo1 chapter 18 . 9/23/2017
that battle of hogwarts was really foolish, no planning what so ever. its so stupid any symphaty for loss of life is gone. found this story rather socialy detached anyways it all seems so fake