hope you come back to it

ohhhhh that's a wind rasengan kinda awesome ahahhaha

why use anko when other seals that are on kimimaro and the sound four can also work i presume

gamabunta uses nature chakra i think as gamakichi used it so i think sasuke will not be able to see the chakra flow through gamabunta

Very interesting plot with the masks! Though I would have liked more if they were alone, it feels you're always having an adult babysit them (which translates to adult meddling and manipulation)

Sometimes I forget how much of a stalker Kakashi is. What's his problem even? He didn't teach Naruto anything at all.

The thing I don't like about this fanfic is how the author portrays Konoha. He makes them seem like thieves and manipulators whenever Naruto is concerned. I doubt he does it deliberately and that just makes it more maddening for me.

First, the second Naruto found out he was from the Uzumaki clan, he should have gotten Kushina's money and scrolls, among which should have been Uzumaki fuinjutsu scrolls. But... he didn't. There is NO WAY that Kushina, a jinchuuriki, Elite Jonin, one of the very few Seal Masters of her time, wouldn't have an overflowing bank account or an entire library worth of technique scrolls. Especially since she would have definitely inherited all of Mito's Uzumaki knowledge and scrolls due to being the last Uzumaki.

Naruto not getting it makes it seem as if Konoha simply decided to take them for themselves, stealing his inheritance because he is just a stupid kid who would have no way of finding out until he was grown up and properly indoctrinated to be too loyal to care.

The situation with the masks only supports that. They took them and researched them without even asking Naruto despite them being HIS CLAN'S. They kinda belonged to him by default. Yet, the Hokage decided to just take them. Sure, he returned them to Naruto but still... if he did that shit to any other clan, he would have a revolt on his hands. The least he could have done is to ask Naruto for permission first. It's not like Naruto would have said no.

what the fuck is the point of this? theres no hook, no reason to give a shit. nothing.

helll yaaaaaa you are finally back and uploading new stuff

As Sabersoul stated in their review earlier this year this was an excellent read hell amazing read in my opinion and it is quite a point of the story to leave this fic but either way even if you dont come back to finish it at a later date this has been really damn enjoyable to just get the chance to read thanks for the enjoyable story m8!

So the obvious is Hinata won’t be paired with Naruto cause she’ll see him close to Karin that being a distant relative and maybe last clan member. It will sadden her heart but I feel she’s will be happy that Naruto is happy and found somebody.

And another relationship that I feel will definitely not happen unless the author made their paths and how the events if he creates would play out . Temari and Shikamaru didn’t fight in the exams since Sasuke came to his fight on time and invasion happens during it. So they won’t have that fight interaction and eventual pre-dance relationship they had in canon shimpudden.

Yeah... Naruto is out of chakra... Woah!

Every fucking opponent is just too fast for Naruto in this fic

El mejor narukarin que he leido

For a genius, Itachi can be really, really stupid, huh.