Reviews for Ignition
Guest chapter 14 . 4/25
No. Even had you written more if refuse to read it. You dont work with a dark lord to take out another dark lord. The price is never ever worth it. It’s better to lose than to sell yourself like that. Just like every other writer, you have Harry stop with the badassness and become a useless doormat again. Fuck them all. Find new friends.
karmakarma2001 chapter 14 . 2/16
Hope this is not the ending and the pairing of harry and Luna together to finish the battle quickly and no friends or family lose their life as Luna would be awesome as a wife for harry
LoverboyLoserboy chapter 14 . 11/26/2021
I hope you come back to this story because I've become thoroughly invested. It's well written and the storyline is perfectly paced.
IloveHeat chapter 8 . 11/19/2021
Best showdown ever. Last chapter too. Fantastic story. Thank you
gginsc chapter 14 . 11/9/2021
I hope you complete this story someday.
Slyth3rinFairy chapter 1 . 10/21/2021
I just want you to know that this is an amazing story. Beautifully written! I really want to read more because i need to know what happens and where this all is gonna go.
andjelija.nenic chapter 7 . 9/26/2021
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
scyfly chapter 1 . 6/10/2021
a little political for my liking(which in a world of corruption and magic means posturing and trash talk till there is a showdown of real power, if the MC has the balls to act)
lots of other smaller issues but nothing to bad

shame its left like this
scyfly chapter 14 . 6/10/2021
all we know from canon is that magically binding comes down to a yes or no on a simple question. do you agree to participate in the tri wizard tournament. do you swear to keep silent about the DA list.
there is no room for a lot of moral ambiguity, like making statements out loud giving exeption for this meeting.
if magical contracts are indeed this complex it is insane it would not be used during trials. unable to lie or obfuscate the truth other then keeping silent. its a no brainer.

enemy of my enemy, please tell me that isnt all thats needed for harry to fall in line again? the problem with control freaks like dumbledore is that there is not give and take, you are either with him or against him. you cannot take your own road and pretent to ignore his manipulations, or agree to work together but still getting no information which is basicly back to square one
scyfly chapter 12 . 6/10/2021
you are lacking a certain consistency, like harry saying i wont fight this war but not acting on it. it might be that it was just harry throwing a temper tanrum instead or something he meant though.

i just dont understand why anyone would fight to stop voldemort but not to make things better. that is like the peasant rebellions only joining a lord to stop the worse lord but not to actually give yourself any rights. only muggleborn that are truly sort sighted would fall for that
scyfly chapter 11 . 6/10/2021
there is a lot wrong with this trial buisness, well it is the ministry of magic so that kinda makes sense but it seems the whole system is geared towards coverups and abuse of power. this is nice and all but it does mean bones is worse then useless if she sticks to the law snd therefore harry should not have much respect for her
scyfly chapter 8 . 6/10/2021
you are using a lot of details not know to harry at this time, some he suspects but never gave it any thought but many have never been mentioned.

voldemort being bullied is a totally non canon one. ohh it makes sense that he was bullied in slytherin and in the orphanage but harry does not know this, he doesnt even know about the orphanage
scyfly chapter 8 . 6/10/2021
ya know its a bit weird you skipped past the whole burning the dementors thing
scyfly chapter 5 . 6/10/2021
what if an elementalist cannot snap their fingers? seems a bit silly to emulate an house elf
scyfly chapter 4 . 6/10/2021
i always found fifth year a little to late for bones to suddenly grow a spine and become competent. i admit you wroter he better then most: interested but useless, but why then did she not have any interest in his previous years?
this always bothered me why has harry never spoken to an auror or the head of dmle. cedric is death a basilisk is death sirius was caught, each was rather public information and shouldve seen an inquirery by aurors not the minister himself as he is a politician not an investigator
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