Reviews for Afterthought
Guest chapter 9 . 10/13
Well that was both expected and really..really...dumb. Suicide in general is dumb. I mean, I get that people are in pain, but they cause soo much more of it when they kill themselves. It sucks to have a love one die, and it hurts when you realize that you can't ever see them, hear them, touch them (hugs, friendly shoves, ect), smell them (idk. Most people don't have this ability but I still remember ehat used to be my best friends scent), to be able to communicate with them, connect with them, and to have fun with them. Hell, I'd even say arguing with them and fighting is great because at least they're still there. Main point is; don't kill youself. It really messes other people up. Even if you don't think anybody cares about you, somebody does and that I can promise
Guest chapter 8 . 10/13
But I am the Sans.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/13
No romance! Please no romance! That stuff is GROSS
Guest chapter 4 . 10/13
Awe! I loved this chapter!
Guest chapter 3 . 10/13
You're the one writting this! Are YOU okay?
Hestia2005 chapter 5 . 8/26
Honestly, I don't know why I'm drawn to these types of stories.
I don't actually have depression, nor do I ever feel the urge to do something... "Stupid".
Maybe it's because I want to understand what others who do have these problems are going through?
I'm not sure.
One thing I do know though, is that, regardless of who you are, I support you, and you can come to me if you want or need to. You don't have to, but I will always try to help you feel better if I can.
Sparksarts chapter 2 . 4/25
This is honestly so amazing
Speechless chapter 9 . 3/30/2018
Damn, brutal. All of this in general. Good work. I'm too... *Undescribable emotion* to make the best review so... Cool story mate
licoricebrightwater chapter 7 . 4/29/2017
I want you to know that as someone who struggles with depression and hearing a certain person's voice in the back of my head, this is really hitting close to home. Thank you for writing it.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
I love this fanfic so much, it shows a different side to the characters. I just loved it.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/20/2017
I just adore these types of fanfiction. Even if it makes me cry a bit.
Ender the multiverse Detective chapter 9 . 2/5/2017
Very good
Llew444 chapter 9 . 1/22/2017
So i was jumping around in Authors faveorite stories list, starting wiyh you amd after a few days I found this.
I didnt check the author so i was gonna pm you about this story i found that has a similar style to yours. Then I checked the authour. Golly so i feel stupid right now.
Anyway, I liked the story- and both endings! Good Job!
~Llew
ThatGuy22 chapter 9 . 12/7/2016
Wow...these endings are great in their own respected ways.

The first ending is one that makes us want more even though there is no need for more which is good.
The Alt. Ending...holy crap the alt. Ending...I was bawling my eyes out after that. It made me fell for these characters that I've only spent the last two hours reading about. That is a sign of good writing especially since this is supposed to be the sad ending. If I could say anything else about this fanfic its that just absolutely amazing.
sanspailols chapter 9 . 10/16/2016
Why MAKE ONE THAT SANS SAYS TO ALL MONSTERS WHAT HAPPENED AND THE FEELZ
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