Reviews for Chuck vs The Butterfly Effect |
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![]() ![]() Sometimes fans come up with good stories. Even less frequently are those stories that not completing would wreck you. However, rarely does a story come that you know you wish to have yourself. If anything, I am more enthralled about the turbulence life makes me experience coz I hope one day, I can find the peace in life Chuck and Sarah have been given in this story. PS: Captain Marvel is a great character with incredibly hard choices and conflicts in comics. I hope the MCU doesn’t tarnish that with its overzealous efforts to show “female leads” can anchor a movie just as well. After all, I loved the solo Black Widow movie a lot and it didn’t ridiculously overestimate her strengths. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, this was lovely. Just marvellous! You stayed true to Chuck and Sarah. Thank you for writing it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved loved loved this! Thank you for writing this gem! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really well written story - I truly enjoyed it! Thanks for taking the time to write it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a monster chapter - so much Charah goodness! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow did you cover a lot of Charah territory in this chapter- it was great! Plus Her friendship with Ellie and their dialog was very good! I really wish they had made Yvonne Ms Marvel! You wrote this in 2016 or so…wow they really should have made that happen. Oh well I suspect Yvonne enjoys other projects so maybe it was for the best. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yesssss! Excellent scenes on the street and then in the coffee shop and then the train station! Really engaging and believable- well done! Finally some warm fuzzies for our heroes together! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow that was a rough “life moves on” chapter! I guess I expected them to get together more quickly. The picture is a nice callback! And always good to have Carina back in play. It was a very well written build up chapter but I’m looking forward to some fluff now! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh shit those punches Sarah gave Bryce felt gooooood! Well written fury there! Good action scenes with Chuck and Roark as well! Nice chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good back and forth between Chuck and Sarah and Bryce! Your story developed in unpredictable ways! But damn, that ending - oof. Poor Chuck and Sarah! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now we have some Charah angst cooking - you are hitting on all cylinders for a Chuck fic here! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m enjoying the plot setup so far - Chuck and Sarah on the beach together? Yes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really interesting spin on canon you’ve written! The feelings are brewing, now we just need to get rid of Bryce, as usual! LOL |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was good! Good dialog and some really funny moments! You do a very good job of describing their inner thoughts and feelings. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good story, enjoyed this one even if it was a tad angsty. |