Reviews for The Vasto of White |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I took me one week to read this... It was completely worth it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I once sought to forge the ultimate blade. Not a sword that cuts through flesh, bone, or the living. I sought a blade that terminates enmity... A blade that severs bonds, severs certainty, severs karma. That is to say, to free one of one's fate. Uncountable years of toil to reach this place. Forging thousands of swords to create a barrow of blades. Many paths, converge here. Enduring desires, flow here. Unjust deaths, gather here. My whole life has been for this single swing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() In this chapter Shirou really does become Muramasa |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is why Askin is my favorite Quincy lol I know he's an antagonist but you can't help but love the guy. He had a great fight against Kisuke in canon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kisuke the rat bastard lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. Really shows just how powerful the fate series is. People underestimate fate all the time but it really is one of the most OP verses out their |
![]() ![]() ![]() Some of the quincy bowing at the attack going by had me cracking up, it really is on brand with some of them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() finally! already finished... it's a long journey! overall 9.3/10 I'm satisfied |
![]() ![]() ![]() Read this from chapter one to the end, what a journey this was. The story is the best bleach fanfiction I have read up to date. Ignore the criticism and read all of this. I highly recommend it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey author i read all your fics and i have one thing to say,dont listen to these trolls,your real fans love all your work and writing styles. infact your style as inspired me to keep writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have you ever considered making another Bleach/Fate crossover with Shirou as a Soul Reaper or Quincy? the way you write things, I'd feel it'd be extremely interesting to witness either way |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story is good, but the pacing is pretty trash. The chapters are drawn out just to describe one small where almost nothing happens. I'd seriously consider rewriting this story, as it is annoying trying to read this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aizen is a mood this chapter bro, lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I smell a ship. And I'm lovig it. |
![]() ![]() I had to jump ahead from chapter 2 to chapter 6 to see if this was worth my time, but I can see that it isn't. It may turn into a dumpster fire, but I guess I can't *really* complain since you do this for free in your spare time . |