Reviews for Square One
ImYours1901 chapter 4 . 5/12/2016
Omg, please continue this fic. We got to the besttttt part, i need more. I'm so hooked.
mommymac0508 chapter 4 . 3/3/2016
Wow I was very late reading the last 3 chapters sorry I love it now what will happen next
angel.nieves.1656 chapter 4 . 1/27/2016
Okay yup definitely loving this. DEFINITELY LOVING THIS!
angel.nieves.1656 chapter 2 . 1/27/2016
Damn I need to catch up. Really good details. Don't know what to say yet except it seems she's trying to learn how to turn off her "Beast Mode" I'm guessing?
midnitereader chapter 4 . 1/19/2016
Now that he's gagged her and restrained her it's helping her focus on the sensations. It's not about her any more, it's about them together. I think in the past he has gotten his release but not her, since she said it would be nice to have a release this time. Maybe he noticed that. He's a nice guy, and maybe he wants to give her what she needs. Maybe she would be a nicer person if she could release some sexual tension. I do like what he's doing to her. Maybe he can leave her wanting more of what he can do.
chartwilightmom chapter 4 . 1/5/2016
i have no idea! boy, confusing but intriguing and i want to know more
other than this bella thinks way way too much
keep it coming, sorry rl is nuts
gabby1017 chapter 4 . 1/4/2016
Apparently, he aims to please... Maybe, just maybe teach Bella a lesson... How good it can be...
gabby1017 chapter 3 . 1/4/2016
I loved it... He shut her up...
shecater chapter 4 . 12/29/2015
I'm really liking this story ! Can't wait for the next update!
ranahd chapter 4 . 12/21/2015
Great update. Hope you are doing better. Thanks
Judyblue95 chapter 4 . 12/21/2015
Have I commented yet? Have I told you that, with this chapter, I went back and read the first 3 beforehand just so I could get fully in the mood again? It's even better the 2nd time through. This chapter shows a man who was seemingly overly polite before. Now, having been pushed by her bratty superior attitude, shows us just a bit more of who he can be. My take, anyway. So yes, I'm enjoying this...
pipelynn chapter 3 . 12/21/2015
Hilarious! I want to know his story!
pipelynn chapter 2 . 12/21/2015
Oh my...! I can't figure it out! She's so torn up about this I can't imagine what got her here.
pipelynn chapter 1 . 12/21/2015
Wow. Can't wait to see where this goes!
bornonhalloween chapter 4 . 12/20/2015
That was hot hot hot! I love her surrender, and his sweetness. I guess as long as she's muzzled and bound, they're a perfect couple! LOL!
Such wonderful writing. I wish you weren't tortured so, but boy, do we reap the benefits of your meticulous work! XOXOXO
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