Reviews for The Definition of Normal |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() his life is just so saddening at times. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the Narnia/cupboard scenario is amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dedinitelt not an excuse for abuse but...Petunia kind of has a point |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the idea that Petunia is accidentally teaching him about magical will via the whole "keep your idea in mind while you wash" thing. Really honing those wandless wordless magic skills |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for writing this story. i enjoy reading it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, interesting ending. I wonder how Harry will change once he gets some more influences in his life. This was a fun look at how Harry might have managed to cope while living with the Dursleys. I'm very curious how the sequel(s) will unfold now. Thanks for writing this for all of us! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there, really enjoying the story so far! I had to stop and comment on that explaination for Harry's cupboard, I've read fanfiction for a long time and I don't recall seeing the spin of Harry wanting to be in the cupboard before. That was a nice surprise! I'm not sure about the full explaination with Harry being a little older and kind of turning it to be Harry's fault and absolving some of the Dursleys guilt, but I could definitely picture them putting a baby Harry in there out of the way, then when he protests being taken from his "safe place" they decide he likes it and leave him to it (absolving themselves of any guilt they may feel). Granted consider the source I suppose. Anyways I'm liking this a lot and looking forward to reading more of the series! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a brilliant idea! I do feel so sorry for poor Harry and hope he gets a friend. Looking forward to reading more in the series :) than you for your work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think it's a pretty hilarious way to end a Harry Potter story. Especially since there's a sequel. Thanks for writing! It was very enjoyable :) |
![]() ![]() This was very well written. I enjoyed theperspective. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just FYI, there's a typo in the first paragraph where you call Petunia 'Aunt Patricia.' |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, Your diversion point was clearly identified and what followed felt logical. This is a good start. Old-Crow |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! This is so good! I can't wait to read the sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very well written and interesting story. It makes me sad how poor Harry is manipulated but I think his reactions are quite understandable as well! Interested to see how the wizarding world responds to Harry not coming to Hogwarts |