|Reviews for Uninvited|
| Viviane chapter 18 . 1/19
Amo sua história fantástica muito bem escrito continue por favor
| WhisperedVoice chapter 1 . 1/30/2017
You didn't update this story in almost 9 years! It's about damn time you do so. You can't just stop at the best part and leave me hanging!
I really enjoyed your story, although I think Gohan is a little overreacting. He acts more like I would have imagined Vegeta to react to Goten and Bra xD
Anyway, I love this story and you need to update or repost.
I will definitely follow your story in case you decide to update after 9 years! :)
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/24/2015
| WhisperedVoice chapter 18 . 7/29/2015
This fic seriously needs an update ;)
| Nonamejustwords chapter 18 . 3/21/2015
Puhahaha update this shit forrealzys , seriously
| Nonamejustwords chapter 15 . 3/21/2015
| Nonamejustwords chapter 13 . 3/21/2015
Pouts aww Goten
| Nonamejustwords chapter 12 . 3/21/2015
Lol Bra and Goten are so funny to me one moment he's telling her to shut up and the next he sleeping with her lol
| Nonamejustwords chapter 9 . 3/21/2015
Puhahaha Bra and Goten are so funny
| S.V. II chapter 18 . 4/18/2014
You want to know what's on my mind? I want to know why you haven't updated in FOUR years. This is the best goten/bra fanfic out there. For the love of all things loveable please finish this story!
| Infinite Romance chapter 18 . 10/21/2013
Aaaaaaaaah! Where is the next chapter?
| FergusonB chapter 18 . 9/1/2013
Please...Come back...I need more! .!
| Infinite Romance chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
OMG I can not believe this story is still not finished, you are evil.
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/4/2012
oh man this is really good plz come with the next chap!
| trunks chapter 5 . 6/5/2012
love the story could you do a trunks 18 one i like the trunks pan pair i just want to see your ideas