The frantic jargon scramble was great! So glad Dani's stable. Also Jazz and Danny caring about each other quietly. So psyched about all of this.

Oh I love the concept! This looks very interesting and I hope you continue. A good Dani fic is hard to come by and I like where this could go!

oh, what a cliff hanger! thanks for this awesome story! please keep writing this, its great!

Hi, just thought that I would point out an odd action.

Danny's mother surely has no reason to think that Phantom (a ghost in her mind) needs to hydrate himself.

I don't see why she would ask him to do so unless she believes that ghosts also need to stay hydrated.

Oh! What's gonna happen next?

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AhhahahahahhahahHa. Took me a while, but I found it. For those of you that are impatient.

Oh you! You just adore the cliffies don't you? Haha. Don't worry, it keeps us coming back for more!

(loved that Belt reference in the AN ;))
Cliffie! That was a great place to end the chapter XD
Great job as always!

Haiju this is so compelling! Truly in love with this story. Can't wait to see where this goes...

More please!

What? That can't be it! Where's the rest of it? I got to know what is going to happen to Dani! Will they be able to save her? Please update soon!

I'm so excited to see where this goes! I love all of your stories, but this one promises to hit a special cord with me. X3 Also, you should know I was half way through the first chapter when my wife went into labor. lol So I think this story will always hold a special place in my heart if only for it's timing. It had me getting all emotional about Dani then my wife comes out and says my little girl is coming. XD It was an interesting mindset to be in.

DARN IT HAIJI

This is amazing! I'm already hooked and it's only the first chapter

Woah well that got intense quickly