Loved the comment about Danny moving easily around the furniture. Mmmm, wonder why? It's a nice touch.

Yesssssssssssssss. This is a very different concept, and it's fantastic. You show great character bonds here, and I'm entralled.

Please don't stop there..my heart can't take it..
Great chapter as always can't wait for the next one

Why do I have the feeling that it's not going to work and Dani's going to blow up in Danny's arms?

Anyways, thanks for posting! The feeling was very intense and the push to read even more so.

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!
That better work!

Ayiii. Cliffhangers like that make me spazz out so bad...I swear I had a rabid squirrel in my head, running madly in circles and going, "Ecto-dejecto! Ecto-dejecto! It's some kind of Ecto-dejecto! It'll save them pleaaaaase AGH there's no other chapter!"

Ah.

I am not one to write, er, meaningful reviews, usually, but your phrasing and writing is so vibrant and complex that I think it'd be just plain ungrateful not to. Your works are enthralling and realistic - the characters and the plot are always deep in a way that's really difficult to do, especially in a fandom like this where the original cartoon liberally employs 'toon logic (you know what I mean, I think). It obviously takes a lot of care and thought and proofreading to publish chapters like this.

So.

Thank you. I'd say great job, but that would imply that I'm in some way qualified to judge your writing, which is definitely not the case. Thank you for the time you invest in creating stories that I and many others enjoy reading.

Ohh man! You sure know how to end on a cliffhanger! Can't wait to see the next chapter :)

Is it wrong to hate Maddie right now? Damn, just damn.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Ahhhhh NOO so short and such a cliffie! Pls more! I can't wait for the sciencey stuff that's bound to be next. I'm a sucker for ghost science ;) I'm excited to see what you have planned. What was the flash of light Maddie saw? Was it Dani finally dissolving or something else? Idrk something's probably going over my head.
(Thank you for posting; this was the perfect before-bed read.)

Holy crap. I need more. I can't take all this suspense, man! I'm dying over here!

AWW C'MON. XDD Great chapter. please update quicker though!

This is a really cool idea, can't wait till the next chapter! 3

damn, i got scared that its just an oneshot with an open ending for a while! so glad it isnt
your work is always so good tbh. i am already emotionally invested in this story

Thank you so much for deciding to share this.

You make a good point that the Fentonworks weapons can be misused. The possibility of such abuse could keep me awake at night. Your descriptions really let me visualize not only the horrible new baddie but the scene in vivid clarity.

I've noted before that there seems to be a lot of differences in how the physiology of ghost and Danny in particular are handled. I'm enjoy your take on this.

This is awesome, very survival 0 Keep it up!
-Cheshire