Reviews for What Little Girls Are Made Of
AmitraDay chapter 2 . 11/11/2015
Loved the comment about Danny moving easily around the furniture. Mmmm, wonder why? It's a nice touch.
RestlessRaggedandReckless chapter 2 . 11/11/2015
Yesssssssssssssss. This is a very different concept, and it's fantastic. You show great character bonds here, and I'm entralled.
faytiaa chapter 2 . 11/11/2015
Please don't stop heart can't take it..
Great chapter as always can't wait for the next one
Guest chapter 2 . 11/11/2015
Why do I have the feeling that it's not going to work and Dani's going to blow up in Danny's arms?

Anyways, thanks for posting! The feeling was very intense and the push to read even more so.
Miyu Hinamori chapter 2 . 11/11/2015
That better work!
Verdantia Akalixi chapter 2 . 11/11/2015
Ayiii. Cliffhangers like that make me spazz out so bad...I swear I had a rabid squirrel in my head, running madly in circles and going, "Ecto-dejecto! Ecto-dejecto! It's some kind of Ecto-dejecto! It'll save them pleaaaaase AGH there's no other chapter!"


I am not one to write, er, meaningful reviews, usually, but your phrasing and writing is so vibrant and complex that I think it'd be just plain ungrateful not to. Your works are enthralling and realistic - the characters and the plot are always deep in a way that's really difficult to do, especially in a fandom like this where the original cartoon liberally employs 'toon logic (you know what I mean, I think). It obviously takes a lot of care and thought and proofreading to publish chapters like this.


Thank you. I'd say great job, but that would imply that I'm in some way qualified to judge your writing, which is definitely not the case. Thank you for the time you invest in creating stories that I and many others enjoy reading.
scullysthumbtacks chapter 2 . 11/10/2015
Ohh man! You sure know how to end on a cliffhanger! Can't wait to see the next chapter :)
Invader Johnny chapter 2 . 11/10/2015
Is it wrong to hate Maddie right now? Damn, just damn.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
bloodblossomtea chapter 2 . 11/10/2015
Ahhhhh NOO so short and such a cliffie! Pls more! I can't wait for the sciencey stuff that's bound to be next. I'm a sucker for ghost science ;) I'm excited to see what you have planned. What was the flash of light Maddie saw? Was it Dani finally dissolving or something else? Idrk something's probably going over my head.
(Thank you for posting; this was the perfect before-bed read.)
EmeraldTooth chapter 2 . 11/10/2015
Holy crap. I need more. I can't take all this suspense, man! I'm dying over here!
InvaderL chapter 2 . 11/10/2015
AWW C'MON. XDD Great chapter. please update quicker though!
Icestar chapter 1 . 11/9/2015
This is a really cool idea, can't wait till the next chapter! 3
anon chapter 1 . 11/4/2015
damn, i got scared that its just an oneshot with an open ending for a while! so glad it isnt
your work is always so good tbh. i am already emotionally invested in this story
MsFrizzle chapter 1 . 11/4/2015
Thank you so much for deciding to share this.

You make a good point that the Fentonworks weapons can be misused. The possibility of such abuse could keep me awake at night. Your descriptions really let me visualize not only the horrible new baddie but the scene in vivid clarity.

I've noted before that there seems to be a lot of differences in how the physiology of ghost and Danny in particular are handled. I'm enjoy your take on this.
monocheshaa chapter 1 . 11/2/2015
This is awesome, very survival 0 Keep it up!
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