Reviews for What Little Girls Are Made Of |
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![]() ![]() This was so cute thank you! |
![]() ![]() The gooy gooy mush mush makes my heart warm. |
![]() ![]() I laughed quite thoroughly throughout this last chapter. Hey, who knew? Haiju CAN write something happy! You're wrapping up a lot of things here aren't you? Maybe that roughing it can get a conclusion? Or... Did it already get one? Hmm. I'll have to go look. Anyway! Amazing job! You tied everything up really well and I think you captured the...oddness... Well, perfectly. And it is funny how everyone has tried to kill Danny at some point or another. I think Lancer is the only one who hasn't... |
![]() ![]() ![]() After reading Shadow of a Doubt, I kinda needed something cheery. So I'm glad I happened upon this one. Your descriptions are always so vivid, and I really enjoy the excerpts of scientific and medical jargon. Are you in the medical field, or just an incredibly good researcher? Either way, it's very impressive! ~Rose |
![]() ![]() This is one of THE best fanfics I've read! It's awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh that is an awesome ending! Danny on pain killers is hilarious XD and I love how he just is taking all this on so casually. Also, wow who knew he liked ketchup that much? :p I can't tell if he's doing this to avoid some of the awkwardness or if its the meds, but I found it highly entertaining. Poor Val having to handle that right in front of everyone but I also kinda liked it. It made it less intense and everyone was on the same page for once (really when does that ever happen in DP?) Tucker is great in this. He catches Danny, takes away the ketchup, cracks jokes. He is just awesome and you see just how used to Danny he is in these actions. Sam's sarcastic commentary is always a nice complement. I wonder if Dani will always taste jello now...that'd be an interesting side effect. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an awesome story! BTW doesn't Dani have Green eyes in ghost form? I remember you mentioning her with big blue ones a few times before she changed back.- |
![]() ![]() ![]() SO GREAT! This last chapter made me so happy! They're all secret free now, and Dani's got a place to live! I looooooved this story, you did a spectacular job writing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I very much enjoyed the story. I really like this last chapter because it wraps up everything very nicely. It's a preview to the default that life is going to fall into for them from now on, and it's good. That last sentence was killer. :-) Good Luck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this ending :3 I'm glad Dani got accepted, and the closure with Valerie was really nice :3 Delayed twins omg XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story. And there's nothing more to say... -PJ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the ending this is one of my favorite phantom storys. your loyal reader, labass |
![]() ![]() ![]() Valerie, oh Valerie, I adore your reaction, you curmudgeon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazing and adorable and I love it! At some point, if you feel up to it, I'd love to see some little snippets from between chapter 5 and chapter 6. Like Vlad getting told off, or the scene in the waiting room when they got Danny to the hospital, or something from his time in bed. I realize this story had more to do with Danielle and the whole revelation thing so I understand why you didn't add in much more. But some snippets would be highly enjoyable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() do you think you could write a oneshot about maddie and vlad's 'conversation' |