Reviews for What Little Girls Are Made Of |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What? That ending line though. XD I guess they didn't quite tell her yet how they saved her. This was absolutely beautiful. The fluff at the end. And Valerie. And the entire "everybody in this room has tried to kill me at some point." I laughed so hard. Seriously, awesome job on this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do you have any idea how tiny DNA is? Seriously, I'm tired of seeing stories where a drop of blood goes on a slide under a microscope and "hey, I see human DNA." Nothing works that way! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woo! That was awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Delayed twins lol. Whatever painkillers Danny is on are amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oops, I accidentally commented using an account that me and my sister share, BrainBrawn, but you get the point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's sad that this over, but alas, all good things must come to an end. Loved the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love, love, love this! Love it! It was short but well worth the read. Great, fantastic, awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I love it! You are amaizing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again, thank you so much for this story. It really was a warm and deliciously fluffy ending. I really loved the way you show how the Fentons are loving and accepting. As you talked about before this abbreviated style where you give just enough information to let us figure it out works very well here. The easy going talk between everyone fit just right. This story is about revelations and you fit Valerie as well. I also chuckled when you pointed out that everyone has tried either on purpose or accidentally to kill Danny at one time or another. It really did the trick of welcoming Dani and Valerie in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If this is really the end then great story, nice short and sweet. It's always good to Dani gain a family especially after just barely surviving something deadly like that monster attack. I can't wait for your next story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw well at least Danielle is now a part of a family and she just couldn't be happier huh? Interesting how it all worked out to say the least. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was awesome. I wish there was more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish I could give you kudos like on AO3. This story defintely deserves kudos |
![]() ![]() ![]() SOOOOOO CUUUUUUTE! Awwwww the Maddie Dani mother-daughter bonding was so adorable! I LOVE THIS STORY! Can't wait to read more :} |