Oh interesting...

Yikes

This is going to be interesting

I really liked the clever use of the Nasty sauce. The whole thing about exploding condiments was fairly ridiculous but since it was there, you made good use of it. The jello was also clever with a hint of underlying amusement. The way lime jello sort of quivers and shimmers with a translucent glow make it seem the natural ghostly food.

You usually dance around a reveal and tease the audience with close call and here you present one in an almost gentle way. I also liked how you handled Jack. He's a character that I've come to enjoy the more I work with him.

We've been so focused on Danielle's condition, that it has diverted concern for Danny's injuries.

You know...after the review i just got on my recent christmas fic seeing this story updated really made my day.

Omg... This is...well I was not expecting that. But I love it. I love how Jack kinda sorta /knew/. I knew they couldn't be that idiotic! Haha!

Didn't see that coming!

For some reason I kinda liked how casually the reveal was done here. It's refreshing.
Here's to the next two chapters!

Oh my god.
Literally his secret is out, and everyone is getting the lovely dovely feels when
BAM. Angst. Right there. In th s.
I'm not crying your crying.

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Ah, these kind of cliffhangers just leave me on the edge of my seat for weeks! Great job!

Oh boy. Marie still seems to be in a state of semi-shock, but Jack's taking everything pretty coolly, that's great, honestly.
I loved the Jell-O thing, that was pretty funny. Oh, and thank you for reminding me what my favorite dessert food was. I really try my hardest to forget that, so thanks a bunch.
Good Luck!

Don't know why I didn't start reading this sooner. I love reading your fanfics.

Damn, that was a pretty awesome cliffie:3

I think this might have been my favourite reveal of all. Somehow the lack of drama made it all the more...intense? Like you can really feel the seriousness of it Idk.

But anyway. I'm more worried about Dani at this point. I'm sure Danny's going to be just fine ;)

Wow, this is such an amazing fic. Gotta say, this is probably my favourite rendition of Jack I've seen. Often, folks make him very dumb, docile, and clumsy. What people forget, though, is that he's a scientist. He was at college, so he's clearly smart. He's a goof, yeah, but that's not his only quality. I like how well you've established him, makes him seem more like the "dad" character we see in the actual show (because Jack has some awesome moments, but fan writers often seem to forget about those).

I'm so stoked to see what happens next. Can't wait for the next update! Is this fic on a regular schedule?

*keening quietly* Danny Danny Danny

Well the cat's out if the bag, lets see how the hospital visit goes.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.