if remus hadnt try kill snape at school so much wouldnt hsave happened and thinking 3 dead friends (wormtail) was a good price just to keep albus alive a man who had children abused a man who got people killed i say i hope he gets a silver knife in his back from a friend

omake "your right mooney keeping secrets is wrong come on lets go see the aurors" remus looked up and tried say something "after all your a wherewolf who attacked a student in
hogwarts and nearly killed him if not for me. so come one lets get all your secrets out to show your not a hypercrypt" still great story i enjoying

lol omake "okay let him give out others ecrets i can do the same...hows your sister arianna i had a nice chat with abathorpe oh thats right you killed her while fighting your lover grindwolt who you the later hid in a castle in germany" albus had been about to say something but his heart started to hurt and hadnt had time before to many of his secrets were revealed. "dont worry ask gridwolds great aunt she lives same place and writes the history books for hogworts...wonder why she not mention he nephew and dumbldores fight and love affair?" dumbldore was pale white. "oh well i leave you with this gay murderer bye bye." great story so far

Remus is so annoying, his morals and outlook on life is unrealistic. Honestly, who cares about remus? If he would have died at the bookstore it would have saved everyone a lot of trouble.

Wait couldn't Sirius just call for Kreacher? He's a Black Family Elf so he has to come if called by Sirius

Been a while since I read the last story didn't Hydrus get married with another Immortal?

Where is she?

This MC is the epitome of plot armor. Who else dies this much other than the people in DBZ?!

The MC seems way more incompetent than in the first story. Generally, people get better at things and not worse...

The pointless drama with Lupin made me drop the story. I enjoyed the prequel, but this conflict added nothing and did not make sense for the character as established. It would have been something if the world was AU, but it isn't so the change of character feels forced.

Great story. Sucky ending.

I meant to send this either chapter 1 or 2, but forgot, sorry. In many of your stories your teary scenes are off the screen they are so good, they leave me teary or at least deeply affected. The battle at the Longbottoms was superb as well. I was reading trough them so quickly that I am going back to reread them so that I make sure that I did not miss anything.

Wonderfully written, thank you for sharing these!
Can anyone tell me what DMLE stands for? I didn’t get it in this or the previous story..

good story

Thank you for another wonderful story. Never stop writing.

The end was very fun