awesome fanfic.

Uh, if the orochimaru mark gave him 5,000CP, shouldn't his CP be 7,000CP right now?

and again, he attacks for a decent bit, and no one does or says anything.

i never understand fics thet have gara attack after someone forfeits, and he isnt disqualified.

Oh no. The author got hit by truck-kun

y se marchóy a su barco le llamo libertad

voto por Hitomi, el protagonista merece amo para si mismo

acaso... se convertirá en el avatar?!

the premise is good, but I don't like the part where it mostly became ll about Naruto all of a sudden. I ustt got bored, Narruto shit and worthless wordcount for stats.

This hurt me. Right in the English but still a good story. If only the English was better

Yeah I',m done. this story has turned into a chaotic mess and has become more difficult to follow and read. Lots and lots of fillers, I'm not even sure where your going with this story line, purpose what purpose? And the whole gaming mechanics seemed to have been forgotten, oh and his magic eyes almost forgotten about that, what happened to it? And the dialogues has taken a nosedive into the realm of crack fic. Maybe rewrite and clean up a little and try to follow a plot line that actually makes sense not this meandering mess.

Goku abridged for the win

now that i think about it if ino dose possess someone her body falls asleep so even if she forfits in someone elses body its not before she already lost ... oh she probobly has hashirama cells that will patch things up, hope you come back this is getting good but last updated in 2017 dose not give me hope

Ohh that’s why I dropped this. Clone wants to be free from the original is kinda scary.

Carden~ This chapter was crazy, and it was nice and long. I just really like all the action and fighting and twist. It's exciting.