Reviews for Crumble
Fenikkusu Ai chapter 1 . 11/16/2015
I feel sorry for the Pearls in this world. :(

I like how the Sapphire race was described; sapphires are one of my favorite gems. The writing and dialogue were wonderful!
Lady of the Sky chapter 1 . 11/12/2015
Well, that's terrifying. I just thought the spike was an intentional imperfection like the brain lesions in the Uglies series. This is constantly inflicting punishment for no transgressions, just to achieve perfect compliance. A permanent migraine, and the only way to fix it could kill. I could really see this as something gem society would have, too. Everything has a task, after all, and if there's no real joy to be had from it, then just make it impossible to refuse.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2015
Pearl... Homeworld is such a dark place. I liked a string of Pearls best though. Update soon.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2015
You know I hate to be that guy, but I need Moar plz thanx. This is the type of story and solid writing the fandom needs. Thanks for the great story
jasper-jinx chapter 1 . 11/4/2015
OH MY GOODNESS PLEASE CONTINUE THE IS SO AMAZING
InfiniteOdds chapter 1 . 11/4/2015
Holy crap. This is a very interesting take on how Rose's Pearl came to be. It's very logical, with no plot holes. Great story!