Oh wow! The story is even better than the original!Thank you for your wonderful saga! I could not stop reading it was so captivating! Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us!

I'm enjoying it so far

Threw* not through.

OK I have had all the feels with this one and the epilogue is the Chef's kiss. I loved how you wrapped it all up and continued until they died on their own terms. I was kinda surprised the one of Harry's boys wasnt a mate though especially if he had been mated to Olivia with Scorpius as the other mate. I hope you continue to write. You are talented and I have binge read this to no end.

Well this was hump but ok lol

As absurd as this little time travel jaunt thay Hermion took is. Ill allow it although its completely ridiculous.

Um can u tell me why we have gotten like 12 chapters of quidditch like dont get me wrong i like it too but did u at no point feel like u were deviating from the plot with totatlly irrelevant sub plot? Like did u just want to make Hermione a JR Coach and so decided to spend 20 chapters on summer and puddlemear cuz thats definitely what it feels like. And to top that off barely a week had passed since this little deture and yet we are less than 20 chapters from the end . I get there is a sequal but seriously why?

Woow

Look the story is good but Hermione is the definition of humble braggard (how she invents spells, how she speaks to people and gets her way). She also airs every dirty laundry out to everyone and can't keep anything private. (How the twins and Oliver treated her, etc.) I don't think I will continue reading this. I like Mary Sue' stories, and I don't mind overpowered, but I can't read about people who are entitled or act like they are the only smart thing in the room. So thank you so far and I wish you the best.

thanks for updating and reviewing.
I know I read this some time ago and enjoyed it.

gotta say, Barney chocolate is pretty awesome. Too bad she wasn't compelled to sing that song too!

If Hermione is a descendent of a Gaunt she should be able to hear the snake talk. Just like Harry, since he got the power from Riddle. Who is also a descendent from that family line.

Hello Sweetheart...

I'm am loving this story but one thing Oliver Wood is not part of the Sacred 28 like the Weasley or Malfoy are...

This is a terrible story.
I've read a bunch of reviews for the previous chapters and it seems some people do actually enjoy this, but I'm giving up. I was hopeful because you said you have grown a lot as a writer and I thought I could endure until then, but for now, I will give it a rest. Maybe later I could carry on.
For now, let me tell you which parts I think are terrible, which might help you if you think they are valid criticism. I understand if you think my opinion is trash and don't follow it.
First of all, I don't have any problems with Mary Sues. Some say they are boring. But I think we can also enjoy stories where the MC doesn't have any problems. The whole genre of slice-of-life proves it. In this story, you can't even call the MC a Mary Sue, because she does have problems that can't be solved with power.
What I have a problem with, is the repetitive manner of annoying things. Many reviews pointed out that the hateful bullying was offputting. I think you either should provide a better reason for the bullying, for example showing the girls' jealousy better, or tone it down.
Another thing I didn't like, was the overexaggeration. The bullying escalated very quickly to the point of unbelievability even in such a fantastical universe. I mean, Angelina shoved Hermione down when she was on top of the twins! That just won't happen. Or the part where they have tears on their faces every time Hermione cracks a dumb joke which is not even funny. Or the part where the boys call her the most kind, amazing selfless girl in existence when they talk to her for 2 hours for the first time. Or the fact that her sorting took so long while the whole castle waited on the edge of their seat.
This review is getting long as is, so I just put the things I had in mind at the time of writing.
I hope you have a blast writing more fanfictions for your audience to enjoy.

thank you for the long awaited ending. loved it

Read this whole thing over the space of 3 days... couldn't stop reading. Amazing story that had me gripped from the start. loved that you covered every single book and still kept some events canon while making it a whole new story.