|Reviews for I'm a what!|
| Girlonfirebetch chapter 1 . 3/30
I know Im late but this was hilarious! Hahaha make another one
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
pooor Mitsui! OMG! that was something hhhhhhheeeeeeeeeehaaaa!
| arashikishu000 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
LOL! Your story was very, very funny. The fanfic list deserve a special shout-out for their creativeness and hilariousness. I laughed so much! XD
oh, and I love these lines:
"KOGURE AND I? KOGURE AND I! I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS! HANAMICHI AND RUKAWA? HANAMICHI AND RUKAWA! I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS EITHER! SENDOH AND KOSHINO? SENDOH AND KOSHINO! Well, probably…I always thought there was something behind that hentaish smile of Sendoh."
The repeats, and that last bit about Sendoh's smile, were brilliantly funny. Lol. This story is not crap at all. Kudos to you for writing such a funny story! :D
| Just Mitsui's one and only luv chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
it was really sweet ...i liked it a lot !
| pathogenicmicroorganism chapter 1 . 1/13/2007
Love the whole Muscles line, i can just see him flexing them now... sigh...
Unfortunately, i have been writing mary sue fics although one did credit me of disguising her well, so I guess it's a triumph in some way, ne?
Thanks for reading this! Good job by the way, and I wanna add love the sendoh koshino line too!
| karina onee-sama chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
almost laughed... but don't get me wrong. loved it.
| poutergeist chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
actually it wasn't corny it was really funny!...
i was laughing all the while i was reading it!... great job by the way!
| RWT chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
And Sendoh? All that guy ever does is…fish!
-Yes he pretty much do XD.
WHAT ARE THESE MUSCLES FOR?
-I can actually see him flexing as he yelled that one XD.
| Garowyn chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
Haha, hilarious! Poor Mitsui.
| The Celestial Tiger chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
Oh, you have no idea how much I love this story...because it's painfully true! I weed through so many story summaries EXACTLY like that. In fact, it's getting rare to find something that isn't like that! I'm not a fan of mary sue and yaoi at all. I'm not the kind of person who goes around flaming people for their yaoi stories, but I have to wonder where on God's green earth these concepts come from! Most of the characters that are getting dipictively bent beyond recognition are too young to be in such adult situations. Either that or such representations have absolutely no compatibility with their actual peronality. It's the most unrealistic stuff.
I'm almost obsessive/compulsive about portraying a character as he or she has been defined by their creator. 99% of the characters who get turned into mary-sues or homosexuals are SO much deeper than that! Thank you for having the courage to post this. I was nodding and grinning the whole time.
The Celestial Tiger
| DraejonSoul chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
I. LOVE. YOU. My hats off to you for having the guts to post this.
Thanks for writing this. I feel the same way about how people just throw their ideas out there and not thinking about the quality of their work. Quite frankly, I hardly check the Slam Dunk section for the very same reason, and the same reason drove me to write some stuff on my own (there's still room for improvement, but at least it's Mary Sue and yaoi-free _). So it's a blessed thing to actually find something in there that's nicely thought of and downright entertaining.
I really wish yaoi writers would really, really think of what they're doing. I also wonder if they've actually seen two men (or more, whatever)having-well, um, sex. Because most of the writers are teeners, and would likely be grossed out. Yet would wanna get Rukawa and Sakuragi together? ? ! I mean what's up with that? Ironically, the shounen-ai bandwagon was started by a woman. And I'm sure she wove intricate plotlines for them to make them credible and entertaining: two things I definitely do not see in present fanfic writing.
I know I'm being harsh to these poor writers (hey, I do QA at work!). But with what they're doing, it's almost synonymous to suitcases lost outer space (read: debris thown out there for no significant). I dunno, that's the first thought that came to my head. I wish some kids would work harder on their fics...
Like I said, I liked this. Don't you love it when the creative juices flow in the most inopportune times?
Ganbatte yo, girl! Keep it up!
| Artemis Obscure chapter 1 . 1/12/2003
yeah school sucks... like this one... poor mitsui-kun...a gay...
| Seki chapter 1 . 1/10/2003
*laughs like she nvr laughed before* XD I'm a yaoi writer, but don't worry, I'm not offended. I'm so terribly amused at how you show the stereotypes of fics that are found in here _
| dragon dreams chapter 1 . 1/5/2003
one word: funny!