Sooo... What part of the story requires Harry to be female?

I kinda assumed Harry would end up as Moriarty, but I guess she might end up dating him instead. Lol

And why did a wizard store make her muggle clothing?

(I have NEVER seen any newer fashion than Victorian on a witch in the movies, and in the book series is robes and nothing BUT robes for both genders.

I'm not even sure they wear underwear under the robes, but who knows? Lol

The school uniform, dresses, and open front robes is movies only.)

But even the movies make a clear distinction between muggle and magical fashion -and it falls in the victorian and/or goth cathegory for witches.

Once I got over those things tho, I found the story to be very good and well-written thus far.

If rather similar to "Business" by Esama.

Although it IS only the first chapter, so that might change later. Lol

I had read and loved this back when it ended at chapter 19, and I'm glad you returned to fill in the blanks, even if not by writing the entire thing outright. The author's notes of what you had been planning do a lot towards overcoming what would be lost if you left it abandoned rather than outlined. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Cuz frick rape Lockhart

Your writing is so hot. Jasmine as Moriarty is like a super-criminal's wet dream. 3

Regarding the spell that turned the girl's eyes green, to hide red spells, I don't think that's how it works.
Green eyes would reflect GREEN light, and hide green spells.
To hide red spells, it would need to reflect red light.

I think the setup or 'Moriarty' was a bit too fast. She just entered the magical world, she didn't know enough about the possibilities o magic to fully develop all of this in just a couple months before going to school.
In order for it to be possible, it either needs to be delayed by a year, or alternatively, have her discover magic on her own in advance. She wouldn't have access to any capital in that case, unless she managed to figure out that she had a Vault, and could access it without the key.

I truly enjoyed your story very much and I think your ideas on what came next sounded promising. Thank you for sharing your talent with us mortals :D

-"No-one," the everlasting teenager said hoarsely, "has called me that in a very long time."

I will never stop wanting a story *about* Myrtle and righting all of the injustices she is subjected to. The poor girl, forever suicidal yet unable to die.

-Adler
-Baker Street Holdings, housed exactly there, was making ripples in its quickly expanding portfolio and growing profits.

Muggle Press: "Bloody nerds, am I right?"

This is actually an insightful use of Lockheart. As an unrepentant serial mind-rapist, why *wouldn't* he have a long string of other abuses in his wake?

Hot Damn.

story is abandoned don’t bother getting your hopes up

i am now in love with this harry Potter. as a villainess of course, being able to casually pull off things like declaring themselves the bad guy and get away with it is always fun. even better when they use said villain name as well. this is good i hope you do more and look forward to reading other works by you.

Amazing!

Never mind I take it back this is great

Yep so much for planning lol