Reviews for Iterations
Guest chapter 32 . 10/21
Really enjoyed the series but is this discontinued or is there somehwere else to read it
YoungSorcerer23 chapter 32 . 8/15
Hopefully you are on hiatus instead of giving up on it because this a really great story.
Hope you update soon!
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year-of-the-pineapple chapter 1 . 6/6
This is the fic I've been wanting to write since I played the game - you're an awesome creative writer and you catch the canon flavor of the games really nicely!
tEmMIe chapter 32 . 4/5
are you dead?
tEmMIe chapter 17 . 4/5
(glitchtale refrence) 'WHAT IS A FRISK?' lol that cracked me up.
TheOrangeLord chapter 32 . 1/4
please write more!
ColonelJay chapter 32 . 12/18/2019
Ah darn! I assume you're in hiatus, which is sad, but reasonable. Real life really gets to us, huh...?

Well, if you have the time to pick up this story any time, please continue! I really want to see the story to its end!
creativesm75 chapter 32 . 7/12/2019
cool
LordPurgatory chapter 32 . 7/11/2019
nuuuuuu
I want moar
MonMinou chapter 32 . 6/7/2019
Kinda sad to see this be discontinued for a while ;; but it’s understandable, life really can get us at times.

Anyways I’ve recently gotten hooked into Undertale/Deltarune, and have been reading a bunch of fics as a result. This one is by far one of the best ones I’ve read. Although, I feel at times some of the descriptions could use some more details. Some parts sound vague from time to time. But other than that, the concept of the story and the overall characterizations are amazing. I especially like how you wrote Papyrus. A lot of fics write him out to be overly loud and obnoxious. I never got that vibe from him when I played the game, so it’s saddening to see a bunch of fics that writes him out as otherwise. But you put more layers in his character, which I appreciate. Seeing his darker sides is although unfamiliar, but fitting for him.
Sans is pretty scary when he’s not laid back (esp when he’s talking in bold lettering to other monsters). Never really expected that from him but once again you make it fitting. His bond with Frisk is really unique here. I love the family bond you’ve build with them. I wish there were more fics with them sharing a highly written family-like bond rather than pairing them up romantically. And also some of the concepts are once again really unique

Hope to see more someday!
seriouspunch2122 chapter 32 . 6/6/2019
Sucks that you haven't updated in a while this is good
secretwhovianpony chapter 19 . 6/2/2019
*giggle laughs* What a way to have a food fight!
Alkaru chapter 1 . 5/8/2019
Hey-

I just got into the undertale fandom a few days ago, and i have to say that its absolutely, incredibly amazing. I love how in-depth the characters and world is, and how meta the game itself is.

And your story is only making me fall in love with it more. I feel Frisk's determination to break out of the loops and reach a happy ending for everyone, the monsters' fear of Chara's destruction and inhumane sadism, Sans' despair and desperation to protect what he loves. All of these lie beneath the surface of your realistic storytelling (not to mention all the flirty moments, which I absolutely love ;)) ). I really wish I had the words to describe how happy it made me feel to get to read your work, and I really hope you find the motivation to keep working on it. Thank you for all the effort you've put in, and I eagerly await the next time :D
spriteless chapter 28 . 3/14/2019
Just now catching this. Nice to see it's continued. Understandable that after you are burnt out, you write about Sans being burnt out too.
Vivid Murk chapter 32 . 3/6/2019
I'm so happy to return here and see new chapters. I love the interaction between pap and fuku, so heart warming. I hope you know what a pleasure it is for us readers! As time goes on I'll continue to look back on this story fondly
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