Reviews for Holding Out for a Hero |
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The.Ocean.Shadow chapter 6 . 7/14/2021 Can’t believe you ended it like this. Is there a sequel? |
Oblivion chapter 6 . 10/16/2020 ...** that he somehow knows about her crush on him and had only came to her to inform her that he is flattered but he likes someone else ( even if very nicely ) ...it was better not to go tell her at the first place so as to save the Heartbreak...but no...he was adamant on trying to solve the situation himself by just outright rejecting her ... He doesn't know but when he said he like someone else, Marinettte must be thinking that "of course ...why would Adrien like someone like me that way...I must have been a fool to believe that someone could ever be interested in someone as pathetic as me... I can't even form coferrent sentences in front of Adrien & I am so very clumsy... And I am far away from being graceful & super confident like my alter ego...no wonder...no one noticed me or ever thought that I might be ladybug..." [ No offense... it's just that it's typical for Marinettte to down herself like that...She is my most favourite cartoon character in the whole world... ] Just because Adrien felt guilty for leading her on is no excuse to me because lead or no lead...he still managed to hurt Marinettte when he doesn't even actually know how much she really cares for him as he never noticed her as he was too blind for ladybug...not that I hate ladybug or something... nothing like that...but she is more of a mask that hides Marinettte's fear... |
Oblivion chapter 6 . 10/16/2020 I feel like punching & kicking Adrien even if he said his part...it is not his job to go & tell off people ( even if nicely ) that he likes someone else when the person having feelings towards him isn't even ready to confess her feelings for him ... Marinettte must have wished to tell him that herself first but suddenly she knows that he somehow knows about her crush on |
geekqueen2010 chapter 6 . 4/13/2020 Henceforth Adrien deserves the pain of rejection from Ladybug. |
geekqueen2010 chapter 5 . 4/13/2020 #punishJeanviaIRS2020 |
geekqueen2010 chapter 4 . 4/13/2020 Why doesn't Alya simply transform?! |
geekqueen2010 chapter 3 . 4/13/2020 Why doesn't Tikki just have Alya wear the earrings so she can help Chat save Mari and just tell Chat that original LB was sick? |
geekqueen2010 chapter 2 . 4/13/2020 Why do these fics make me hate people named Jean? |
geekqueen2010 chapter 1 . 4/13/2020 Rip Jean, doesn't know that Marinette already met her soulmate and he ain't it. |
Reader011118 chapter 6 . 11/16/2019 This was an incredibly beautiful story. It was written so skillfully. The characters were deep and even entertaining! Thank you for the story! If I could... it’d be amazing if you continued it. This is truly one of the best stories I’ve read. I really enjoyed someone actually writing a good Adrien turning down Mari scene. But boy... I’m sure you could write a marvelous happy ending! I hope you consider it! |
BasketCase1504 chapter 6 . 8/3/2019 Thank you for writing this story! I know that you made the delicious to leave this story here, and I completely understand that. Since most fans of this fanfiction want you to continue, I make the suggestion to write a sequel so this story is not too long, but the fans (including myself) can have closure. It’s just a suggestion, you don’t have to do anything about it. Thank you again for writing this fanfic! ~LoneWolf004 |
Schrodinger25 chapter 6 . 5/27/2019 This is a wonderfully written story and the ending is not one that I normally come cross. It was a great way to end this story here and the emotions were so well written, even if it killed my heart in the process. |
wercrazybesties4lyf chapter 6 . 1/22/2019 Wowerz that is a totally different ending than what I'm used to. Only one of the other stories I've read ended this way. But don't worry, I actually really like it. It's different and nice lol haha, I absolutely loved this story btw you're an amazing writer keep it up ️ |
ShipQueen54321 chapter 2 . 7/2/2018 Oof the cinnamon roll has cursed the world is ending |
seireidoragon chapter 6 . 2/5/2018 Well I do have to agree with your assessment. Continuing your story from here would end up being its own story. This was a great story and I really enjoyed reading it. I would love to see you continue it but if you choose to leave it here that's totally up to you. It is your story and if you don't feel inspired to write then it won't come out right. |