This story is one of favorites! I look forward to your next update :)

Sounds like Chapter 5 is going to be fun XD

This is really good. I can't wait to read more

oh nooooooo :/ Mariiiiiinnnnneeeeetttttteeeeee my cinnamon roll

I'm surprised we didn't see a teammate of his pop into the conversation.
I'm so conflicted, because of course I ship those two, but at the same time, I'd feel rather bad for Jean, but at the same time, he's supposed to get an akuma in this story any-
pleasewinpleasewinPLEASEWIN
Untrained eye... Seemed to have aced... Oh boy.
It's gonna happen any minute now.
Many things can happen in this moment. Someone could transform. Wavemaster could have a change of heart and they'd have to go after him later. WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN?
Throwing down Adrien and kidnapping her did not come to mind.
Yay! I get a gold star!

I'm freaking out on behalf of Marinette and Adrien!

Typically the first chapters are always slow, but that doesn't mean they're boring XP
Also, it seems as though they're in a bit of a slippery situation now to make up for it XD

hi, great chapter, I loved it, but now I neeeed mooore. Before to read your response I saw the part of bookworm Adrien and I thought in Felix, and the huge library in the second floor of Adrien's room, that was a great detail, I can see Adrien like a book worm, and with his rotten luck he probably does the same thing as certain person I know (myself) who buys books in a rush only to discover that the book is the third in a series and can't find the first ones. Anyway... Marinette sacrifice was also very touching, I really want to see what is going to happen.

I was super excited to see an update! Loved all the conflict and action in this chapter. Interested to see how it will progress!

Hehe this is gonna be great, I can feel it. Keep up the great work I'm excited!

Hi, as strange as it sounds, I don't think Nino in the swimming team would be such an oc. I like how your fic is going, I also like how you took elements from the 2d version and mixed the into the story. I am looking forward for the next chapter, bye.

I already left a comment on AO3 but I wanted to add this to my favorites here on FFN so I'm dropping a 'review' for support! haha

(But for an actual comment - I'm curious as to what kind of akuma Jean will become. Something similar to the Dark Cupid perhaps?)

He's got it bad for Mari XD
Another Cinnamon Roll to fawn over!
I loved your introduction to the story, it clearly identifies all the characters and I can tell there's foreshadowing hiding in there. I can feel it laughing at me.
I can't wait to see where this continues

Nice set up! Can't wait to see what happens next!

ANOTHER FIC WITH THIS PAIRING, YES.
Aw, Jean.
Oh noes. Is Nino going to invite Adrien, and Marinette will be so distracted by him that that's when Jean notices or something and then, stuff happens? Probably?
Oh boy. Although the water thing makes he think Adrien may almost drown or something. The "another chance" part is what seems to just, MAKE it. Somewhat terrified.
I AM EXCITED TO SEE MORE.