This was absolutely beautiful, brilliant, made my super emotional, is probably the best representation of the Cast that I’ve EVER seen, and was one of the best stories I’ve ever. Ever. Read. Thank you, sir, ma’am, or wherever in-between, for this experience.

FRISK REEEEEE lmao where did the ree come from

"Ah, my old nemesis: the linear progression of time. We meet again."
I'm keeping that one. Favorite line so far.

Most of the monsters didn't even bother to get Frisk's name; why would he think that they are under the impression that he isn't male or female? It's fine if you want to keep it vague, but Frisk is human, and therefore is physically either a boy or a girl. Why you even mentioned this when it didn't seem to connect to anything is baffling, but w/e. Since you didn't specify which, I'm going with male for Frisk and female for Chara for this story.
It's called gender dysphoria, Frisk. Most kids grow out of it. Still not sure why this is being brought up though.
Okay, hell with it, gonna skip over that part. No, second thought, just stop for now. I'll probably come back to this later, but this is just disturbing. There are so many comparisons I could make, but, hell, why bother? I have decided to post my other chapter reviews though, since this isn't a complete insult to the readers that makes me hate the author; it's just terrible ideas being presented as fact. It's nice to have feedback, and I like to think I'm at least fair, so I'll post all of it that I have.

"One out of one humans agree: Flowey totally cute." I suspect there may have been personal bias in that survey.

Papyrus's "(yay)" was fun.

"about fifty percent of anything I do is motivated by spite" Liked that one too.

"You've influenced me with your flirty ways." Cute.

Yep. Looks like it's almost over…
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What do you mean there's 36 more chapters?!

Small continuity thing here, at the time Chara goes to Mt. Ebott, there wasn't any legend about those who climb the mountain never coming back; that story didn't come about until after she fell down there.

Switching between timeline perspectives mid sentence was a nice touch.

"Toriel had tried so hard in each timeline to keep them from leaving the [RUINS], to keep another child from dying."
Pfft, hardly. She could've escorted any one of those kids to the barrier herself if she /really/ wanted to. Instead, she just let them go on their own, didn't even bother to chase after them. She's just as guilty as Asgore; she just pretends that abandoning her duty to her people was for some noble purpose rather than so she could avoid the blame for not having a better plan to save their people.

Woo! Ship has sailed!
Or sunk, if this is a sibling love, darn. Oh well.

Not really a fan of the player being a character; it takes agency away from the main characters with actual personalities, but it's not that bad.

"GET OUT" and "Maaaaaybe" are my favorite lines from Chara so far. Shipping her with Frisk also helps too.

Jeez Chara, stop messing with Frisk's nails, it's making me flinch.

Holy. Shiz.
This is, hands down, the best fanfic I have ever read.
Even at chapter 14, I had felt like I had read an amazing story. And after that, it just gets better.

To make this review short (since I’m not that great at writing reviews anyway), this is a freaking amazing book. It actually made me shed a tear once or twice. Again, amazing fanfic and great work!

I. Freaking. Love. This. Story. There are no WORDS that would fully show how I feel about this story! So I'll just try to sum it up in a simple, it helped me recognize things, helped me figure out a few more, and I would hate to lose the memories of reading this story. Thank you.

Reading this FanFiction in 5 Days Fills you with Determination!

I have joined the Undertale Fandom just at the start of this month (I know, I'm Really late...) and I have gone through a great amount of fan works already and I would have to say this is the best UT Fanfiction on this site!

I originally started to read the fic and reached the 3rd chapter and read the part with the books the like I thought that it was going to be some dumb spin or something like that so I dropped the story.
The like a week or two later I was going over fics that I haven't finished and saw this fic again. I then saw how popular it was and like a true Papyrus I decided to situate myself within the popularity. And giving this thing another shot was no mistake at all!

This fic hits all the points in my book for an incredible story, INCREDIBLE CHARACTERS!, a stunning and drawing plot that is fleshed out and a more than satisfying ending!
Talking about those parts...

THE CHARACTERS
Your characterization is the true highlight of the story, it stands out the most and is soo captivating! The characters feel like the characters form the game including Chara and especially Frisk considering the game gave us next to nothing about their characters. The interactions between the characters feel so real that I can feel it! They work off each other soo well and it really entertaining to read. This was just top tier characterization and I can't say enough of how much I love it!

THE PLOT
You plot pulled me in and trapped me! I love the path you took with including the player into the story, I was actually looking for a story with a real role from the player while reading it and got pleasantly surprised when I realized this story had that exact thing! These days I normally use the Fanfiction app and use the TTS feature to listen to stories so I can do multiple things at once but some points in your story left me frozen in surprise and shock at some of the plot-points and reveals. The tension at the certain high points left my chest feeling tight and my body stiff. Least I could say all the flashbacks and plot points introduced and delt with game me a feeling of completion!

THE ENDING
It resolved almost everything I wanted to see end and it none of it felt forces or unplanned. The very ending felt complete and didn't make me feel like I was in need for more. I only wish I knew a bit more on the player.

I really liked your story man and I will be checking out more of your work soon! I would of been nice to see more author notes from you, I would of really liked more insight from you!