I really
really love this story
it's amazing
it touches me
it's amazing
good job.
Thank you.

This story truly is very well written. It is, I daresay, similar to a work of art.

Well, guess this will be read by me to prevent boredom.

It's a really good story!

These ratings...

THEY'RE OVER 9000!

oof yes lmao

chara, fanfiction will solve all ur problems

So, I saw some fanart of this story on Pinterest, so I looked it up. DUDE. I’m only on the first chapter, and this is AMAZING. I really like where you’re taking the characters. Thumbs up.

𝗪𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗹𝗶𝘁𝗲𝗿𝗮𝗹 𝗵𝗲𝗰𝗸 𝗷𝘂𝘀𝘁 𝗵𝗮𝗽𝗽𝗲𝗻𝗲𝗱? 𝗧𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗶𝘀 𝘁𝗿𝘂𝗲 𝗯𝗲𝗮𝘂𝘁𝘆. 𝗜 𝗹𝗼𝘃𝗲𝗱 𝗶𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗲𝗻𝘁𝗶𝗿𝗲 𝘄𝗮𝘆 𝘁𝗵𝗿𝗼𝘂𝗴𝗵. 𝗔𝘄𝗲𝘀𝗼𝗺𝗲 𝘄𝗿𝗶𝘁𝗶𝗻𝗴. 𝗜𝗺 𝗷𝘂𝘀𝘁... 𝘄𝗼𝘄. 𝗪𝗼𝘄 𝘄𝗼𝘄 𝗪𝗢𝗪.

This was absolutely beautiful, brilliant, made my super emotional, is probably the best representation of the Cast that I’ve EVER seen, and was one of the best stories I’ve ever. Ever. Read. Thank you, sir, ma’am, or wherever in-between, for this experience.

FRISK REEEEEE lmao where did the ree come from

"Ah, my old nemesis: the linear progression of time. We meet again."
I'm keeping that one. Favorite line so far.

Most of the monsters didn't even bother to get Frisk's name; why would he think that they are under the impression that he isn't male or female? It's fine if you want to keep it vague, but Frisk is human, and therefore is physically either a boy or a girl. Why you even mentioned this when it didn't seem to connect to anything is baffling, but w/e. Since you didn't specify which, I'm going with male for Frisk and female for Chara for this story.
It's called gender dysphoria, Frisk. Most kids grow out of it. Still not sure why this is being brought up though.
Okay, hell with it, gonna skip over that part. No, second thought, just stop for now. I'll probably come back to this later, but this is just disturbing. There are so many comparisons I could make, but, hell, why bother? I have decided to post my other chapter reviews though, since this isn't a complete insult to the readers that makes me hate the author; it's just terrible ideas being presented as fact. It's nice to have feedback, and I like to think I'm at least fair, so I'll post all of it that I have.

"One out of one humans agree: Flowey totally cute." I suspect there may have been personal bias in that survey.

Papyrus's "(yay)" was fun.

"about fifty percent of anything I do is motivated by spite" Liked that one too.