oh my god? i love this? i just read this whole thing and i'm really close to crying. you are a great writer and i will look at your other fics (if you wrote others that is) and see if they interest me! I don't really know what else to say but this is great!

I absolutely love this chapter. It perfectly captures the feeling of deep depression, but also the hope of wading through it. I can definitely relate to those days. Or weeks. Or months. But like with the sticky notes: it's the little things. You have to focus on the little things. I absolutely love your portrayal of these characters. You've weaved so much depth into them. Especially Papyrus. Sometimes he gets written kind of shallow, since he has a much more mysterious brother to write about. But you didn't do that. You portrayed him just as cool as he really is. He really is an amazing character when you really pay attention. You've done a great job at getting that across. I'm glad I still have so many chapters left to read.

Honestly one of the best stories I've read, and the one that inspired me to write my own undertale fanfic. I hope to someday make something even half as good as this. Thank you for writing such an amazing journey.

Truly love this story. Your writing style is/was a big inspiration for me as I work on my fanfic

CH 42 That ... THAT ... WAS...
- BEAUTIFUL! (Cry of Happiness ) .

Whyle Amagamate and the some lost And GASTER and the GREY FADED PEOPLE , STILL IT IS A SHINE OF A NEW BETTER DAY IN BETTER FUTURE ;,)

CH 32 . The answer is Both and Triple for Chara and FRISK in 1 body 2 souls , And FLOWEY Asriel he ... Knows?

CH 27 Chara... YOU... SHOWED CARE AND Love ,AND REGRET FOR YOUR ACTIONS , WITH THAT YOU DESERVE MY FORGIVENESS AND HOPE FOR SECOND CHANCE , EVEN WITH
(THAT LAST ACTIONS ,CORRODD AND ROTTEN THE SOUL!)
. YOU WERE PRETTY GOOD PERSON WHEN YOU TRIED . YOU ARE NOT THAT BAD . I PREFERED IF YOU GOT A CHANCE ALONG WITH FRISK NOT ALL HUMANS ARE THAT BAD .
I HOPE THAT IS NOT EXTERNAL GOODBYE!

CH 24 THE ...MIROR REALLY IS TO OTHER REALITY , WITH INFLUX TO THE VOID, GASTER SACRIFICED HIMSELF FOR PAPYRUS TT RETURN .

CH wo Secret Lab ... Missing Piece. Bad memory remains restors. Forgotten like never EXISTED . DISSAPEARED GROUP .

Ch 13 Gaster says :
1: YOU SHLOULD NOT BE HERE .

YOU MUST GO .

CH 9 When the path in the dream is no path from third who is UNKOWN is either PLAYER , Other PLAYERS who made CHARA TO BELIEVE and act like it was famous or is the OTHER ANOMALY OF SOMETHING ELSE MISSING NOT EXACTLY GLICH , which I dreamed as clown who talks with weird symbols , equations and
music . When it blinks .

CH 8 . From stories some people from them with ill thoughts I WANTED TO GIVE IMAGINARY REVENGE . BAD TIME SANS TO BE EQUAL TO GOOD TIME FROM BULLET HEAVEN . BITS OF FLOWEY AND THE REST IS ME, EMOTIONS BILLET HEAVEN 1;2 AND TOUHOU. IS THIS DIFFERENT?

CH 6 the one in secret door forgotten from the zero point.
Or those who became characters gladiators in a way .

CH 3 I know a bit why She is disturbed from the story of the
The Little Match Girl ;',' \ That after the worst before she seen and felt ... .

New chance with new leaf .

*internally sobs* Thank you.