"just because you FEEL awful doesn't mean you ARE awful!" thank you, Undyne

this chapter. made me emotional. oh payprus. we all need a papyrus

Thank you for writing this. I enjoyed how well you captured each major Undertale character while also giving them something important to do, expanded on Frisk and Chara's personalities, integrated the human souls into the plot and even made Gaster and the Player's contributions to the story significant instead of hokey. Everything you wrote fit into the story you wanted to tell and added onto it, leaving me thoroughly satisfied with how you ended it, and how it was a happy ending that stayed true to everything you established.

If this is the only Undertale fanfic I ever read, it'll be okay because this is the only story I need. Again, thank you for writing and kudos.

*Sans opens jacket in a dark alleyway* Want to buy some ketchup?

ive actually said that to someone beofre, they felt bad about being with me and i said if you cant be selfish ill be selfish for you

I'M DYING XD

Knowing there's a lot more chapter to read fill me with determination.

Aw geez, it's hard to stop smiling while reading this, so cute!

Oh my gosh that was so sad. The last thing they say... Oh geez.

aaaaaaaAAAAAAH that part with Frisk and Flowey was so cute I can't. XD

You write everyone so well. They're all so in character. Ahhhhh I'm jealous.
Also I may have flipped when I read the who's Papyrus part because ahhhhh

"Even if you aren't good, I still love you." I just want you to know that this is like the most beautiful fanfic I've read in a long time and that line stabbed me right in the feels in the best way possible

I love how you write Chara. A lot of times the way people writes them annoys me because they seem completely irredeemable but for some reason Frisk forgives them anyways. In this, however, they do seem to genuinely want to get better. That, and you gave them a personality other than "HEE HEE HEE KILLING IS FUN!" Anyways yeah. I like them. XD

Wow, this chapter is really beautiful for some reason. All their favorite books are kinda metaphors, especially the Little Match Girl. And I actually kinda felt tears coming to my eyes when Chara was talking about it. Man.

Loved this story. Great writing all around. Can't wait to see what else you make.