Great fiction. Lookin forward to more. Write soon.

Short reveiw i know. But but im being a lazy bones. But the story is sanstastic

Ok im stoppin. Skullin. skeleton *face palm* bone hand

Great story so far. :) This has been really interesting. It makes me wonder how Chara will come to terms with what she's done in the past, who she was. Flowey remembers too, even if he won't admit it. Can't wait for the next update.

Definitely a nice story. At then end of the day, seeing Chara and Frisk as friends...It makes me happy.

Thank you.

Okay superduper sweet. The conversation about books seems thought out really well. And the abandoned quiche! Although most people guess the echo flower echoes sans, I think I like it that you keep us a bit in the dark here.
Good luck writing the next chapter!

I like this. A lot. You've got a good idea here-now run with it! While some of your general writing style could use a little spit-n-polish, you've got a great story here and a devoted reader. Nice job!

this is great I look forward to the next update

I think this is very interesting. We don't get a lot of stories where Chara is trying to be nicer and getting along with Frisk. It's a pretty nice start and I look forward to seeing more soon. :)

awesome start

Oooo, this is so interesting! I'm so excited for the next part, where Frisk meets Sans for the first time after their fight (probably). There's so many ways that can go, I can't even begin to guess _

Honestly, I love this. I don't know if you're going to continue this or not but I love how you made Chara. While other people make Chara as a blood thirsty child, you made them seem like they were tired and as if they repented. Wow, this hit my feels...HARD.