Reviews for Wild Hearts Can't Be Broken
NamikazeAi-chan chapter 22 . 11/18/2016
Please write next chapter
ChocolateLover1412 chapter 1 . 8/20/2016
Holy shit! the part about the bed...I face palmed myself so hard I have a bruise on my forehead
jeanaa chapter 23 . 4/8/2016
I know you stated in your last chapter that getting reviews from Wild Hearts makes you feel guilty -so I'm sorry for commentingbut I just wanted to say that I really appreciate the closure you've offered me and other readers. It was really a very thoughtful thing to do that, as far as I've seen, has not been done by many authors who've discontinued their stories. So I just wanted to say thank you. Thank you for your wonderful story and thank you for concluding it.
LightWithoutDarkness chapter 23 . 1/7/2016
I swear this is one of the most beautiful heart touching stories I've read. The pacing of the story was lovely. The relationship between Kuroro and Kurapika was really realistic and very heart warming not to mention captivating. About your ideas I don't really think most of them are cliché, in fact they're really good and original. I really had an amazing time reading your fanfic. I spend the whole day reading this and I swear I don't regret any minute of it. Your writing and your grammar was really good as well. I thank you for at least giving the end to such a beautiful story. Thank you once again for this beautiful story. *hugs and kisses*
SilverRider09 chapter 21 . 12/6/2015
I really, really like your writing. It's professional-that would be the best word I'd use to describe it. -
SilverRider09 chapter 5 . 12/6/2015
The Spider Troupe members don't sound stupid at all. They actually sound quite natural, really, since their shock is understandable... XD And Australia here.
Guest chapter 23 . 11/23/2015
That was so good I really like it I mean it just feels so right you should keep up there good work
Hannah chapter 1 . 11/9/2015
good start, can't wait to finish this
Guest chapter 23 . 11/9/2015
reading the notes made me so sad. but thank you for writing this story. none of it had gone to waste. ;(

also: sending this to my kura-kuro shipping friends because this deserves to be read.
Lara chapter 23 . 10/20/2015
Hey! I just wanted to write to tell you that several years ago I got into this story and then kind of forgot about it. Recently I remembered it's name and looked for it.

While it's a bit sad that it was discontinued, it's good that you feel you've grown as a writer. I read your summary for the rest of the story, and, while a bit clichéd I don't think it was bad or wrong. It was a beautiful plan, and I'm sure you could have pulled it off.

Don't feel guilty for not finishing it, in the end, you have to write for yourself, and if you weren't feeling it, you know yourself best.

So don't feel bad or guilty for this, it was an engaging read and enjoyable as well.
I hope your future projects have the same spirit this one had.
Belloria Rings chapter 23 . 8/26/2015
Oh my god this has to be the best KuroKura fanfiction I've ever read and I'm not exaggerating. Your story is so so so beautiful that I would stay up all night reading this while I'm supposed to be doing my summer reading homeworks and even in my dreams I was reading this beautiful AMAZING fanficition! (U) I'm really sad to hear that you discontinued this story :( The plans you made sounded so freaking FANTASTIC XD! But I just really want to tell you how much I appreciate you writing this. I love you~~
abbyjc chapter 1 . 11/13/2014
love it
Tonaka-izoku chapter 23 . 10/29/2014
Alright ! Even though this is an old fic, I still feel the need to express my feelings for it. I absolutely, fully enjoyed reading this ! Your elevated diction and overall fluency was especially fantastic, compared not only to other fics but in general writing (Seriously, I preferred your story to the list of books I'm currently reading). The descriptions of scenes and characterization was so in-depth, I found myself adding to my own vocabulary, which is always a plus. Just your writing style is so wonderful, even more impressive considering this story was years ago and you're more improved today (comparability at least! Pest Control already seems a step up !)
Devices aside, I adored the entire idea beyond this! The way you nudged Kurapika into the troupe was perfectly done without seeming too forceful and implausible. I agree fully with the other reviews that I've seen when they say your ideas are truly genuine and unique. Even in the final chapters on the boat, while Kuroro n Kurapika were a bit off character, I loved all the thought you've placed behind this story.
On the topic of OOC characters, I think in fanfiction (to an extent) some variances to canon are unavoidable, considering the writers feelings must be taken into account. Still, I found your teasing Kuroro n bashful Pika adorable in this story, and though your headcanon has shifted I'm also excited for a more knowing, less innocent Pika in Pest control! Reading different aspects of characters is exciting, so I do enjoy seeing different views and interpretations of characters ! I mean, who likes a one trick pony anyway?
Wow, I did have some organization planned when I set out to review but I got sidetracked amidst gushing (to be fair I'm trying to cram 23 chapters and over a hundred thousand words worth of reaction here ;3) But, anyway, in reviewing here I wanted to commend you more than anything. It's been over a decade since you started the project, and though you couldn't finish it you still let your fans know of your intentions, which I think is the coolest part. Usually the longer span of time that passes, the less likely an author is to return, but you disproved that generalization.
As I've expressed countless times already here, I adore your writing (and KuroPika) so I'll patiently wait forever for your stories to update. In my spare time I'll prolly reread Pest Control again and review it this time around. While I am excited to see the direction it will take, if you ever have the time I would love to see a revamp of WH.. One story at a time though haha
Super excited for any updates
Rest assured knowing you've claimed another hopeless Fangirl ; v ;
royano chapter 5 . 10/27/2014
this is amazing by the way im from the Netherlands (dutch)
Anonymous chapter 23 . 7/11/2014
... I kind of wanting to cry right now. Even though I don't favour bl, but I think this story is really great and interesting! And, the new anime adaptions created from the old one is really nice! I certainly hope one day that, you will find your inspirations and continue this story! ;)
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