Reviews for The Best of Intentions
Kel chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
Good ... but why is this rated R?
whipper chapter 1 . 9/30/2002
one of the most beautiful stories ever, you should be really proud of yourself. it made me want to cry and laugh at the same time. i'll never forget the part about a ghost with phantom pains ;)
Mystik ArkAngel chapter 1 . 11/26/2000
You need a few more spelling and grammar check to be done. Your characters were very well applied and personalities were accurate. I loved the story and how everything tied together, it was very nice. I love the story! BE KIND: Review "Because I Love You" ( . ?actionstory-read&story-id93855)
Amanda chapter 1 . 11/22/2000
As a writer myself your story has some great details. I really like your style! Maybe next time however, don't include as many unimportant details, your story will have a deeper meaning this way. Good job!
tracy chapter 1 . 11/20/2000
very good