...oops. Kaiba was the one who was sick. heh, heh...i'm slightly out of it.

More,more,more! It's great, and I want to finish it now! Keep it up, you're doing GREAT!

Omg this story is so good, please let seto be all right and please wait more. I can't stand the suspense. And I can't believe serenity's mom would hit her. I never lke her anyways. Anyways please continue this story is great

Me: Nobody wants to listen me. . .

*sniff*

IS THERE ANYONE WHO IS WILLING TO MAKE THEM DO WHAT I WANT THEM TO DO?

/me hears bubbles coming from a nearby river and a fat green fish with buck teeth jumps out with tremendous strength.

Me: MY LORD! THE DOPEFISH LIVES!

Seto/Serenity & Yugi/Tea fangirls: O_O

Dopefish: I AM THE ALMIGHTY DOPEFISH, AND I AM HERE TO SUPPORT AND HELP YOU.

/me turns toward fangirls

Dopefish: (In a serious tone) I AM SURE YOU ALL RECOGNIZE HOW DISGRACEFUL AND REPUGNANT YOUR IGNORANT ACTIONS WERE AGAINST THE ALL POWERFUL KIRBY X. ALTHOUGH HE WAS A TROOL IN THE DOOMWORLD AND NEWDOOM FORUMS AND WOUND UP BEING BANNED IN BOTH OF THESE FORUMS, YOU HAVE ALL FAILED TO TREAT HIM WITH RESPECT BY WRITING YUGI/SERENITY FICS (WHICH ARE MUCH HARDER TO FIND THAN ANY OTHER FICS; YOU MUST GET TO WORK!), AND THAT WAS A VERY UNACCEPTABLE THING TO DO, BECAUSE HE IS GOING TO BE AN ADMINISTRATOR OF A FORUM WE CAN'T TELL YOU ABOUT, AND I AM TO BE A SUPER MODERATOR OF THAT FORUM.

Me: That's right! YOU ALL FAIL IT!

Dopefish: AND NOW, AS YOUR PUNISHMENT. . . I WILL EAT YOU ALL BECAUSE I'M HUNGRY.

(Seto/Serenity & Yugi/Tea fangirls scream and shriek in horror as the Dopefish opens his huge mouth and gulps all the morons in one bite.)

Me: The End :P

Poor Seto, hopefully he gets around to feeling better. Please continue! _

Mimi,

I loved it have the next chapter up soon u got my vote lol ()

Latter,

~sm-candy~

GREAT STORY!

please post chapter 13,14 etc. very very soon. i liked how they had a water fight! on a scale of 1 to 10, i would rate it 10! I hope serenity gets hurt or something by rose or somebody and kaiba has to save her like a damsel in distress thing. you are one of the most best fan fiction writers ever! i'll tell you how i felt about the story in 3 words "I LOVED IT!"

GREAT STORY!

please post chapter 13,14 etc. very very soon. i liked how they had a water fight! on a scale of 1 to 10, i would rate it 10! I hope serenity gets hurt or something by rose or somebody and kaiba has to save her like a damsel in distress thing. you are one of the most best fan fiction writers ever! i'll tell you how i felt about the story in 3 words "I LOVED IT!"

Hey your story is great! Please go on!

Ah this is just so cute! Please continue soon!

I have read, and my response is... update soon, plz! *.*

:: sniff :: another twist in the story D

...perhaps its because of the smoking...o _ o;

THIS STORY IS SO

STUPID, YOU KNOW KAIBA'S ATTITUDE IS NOT LIKE THAT, your grammar is suck, the sentence sometime doesn't make sense, I can't believe people call this stuff "GOOD" , "GREAT"

the begin of the story kind of make sense

the rest is stupid, kaiba DON'T smoke.

He don't even act that friendly, did u read "the french maid in the Kaiba's room" ?

Kaiba's a serious person, he can't not fall for some one that easily.

Yep! this note is mean but that's the truth, i know this is fanfiction, but the story must make some sense.

my name is...

Aw! Cute story! i love Seto/Serenity stories! ~Woodelf193~:)

oh oh! kaiba's dying cause he smokes huh huh huh? **getting excited** XD hahaha~ XP okay continue please! please please! **pictures kaiba dying** XD jk jk!