( "You'll pay for that!" Duke cried out, as he flicked numerous dice at Mark's fat blubber. Mark seemed to get annoyed and angered, as he lifted Duke and tossed him aside.)

DICES? DUKE,DO YOU THINK THAT'S FUNNY? 0_o

( "Duke.." I couldn't take this anymore. All my friends were getting hurt and I just stood there doing nothing. Then I decided to take some action. I bit Alex's hand and kicked Chris's shin. The two immediately let go, as I ran off and tackled into Mark's stomach. Mark toppled backwards, as I jumped onto his stomach.)

0.0 Go,Serenity! -

*After reading some more* I don't get it. What could Kaiba do with a stick? *thinks,and realizes that with the right strength,a stick could be more like a knife* Oh...

("The same goes to all of you. Never bother us again.")

YEAH! You tell them!

("Okay, well, this is Domino Hospital and your mother had suddenly collapsed from work.")

Why is it that everyone's only going in and out of the hospital? 0_o

(No matter how much I hated her or despised her, I still loved her.)

That sounded confusing,and yet it made sense!

( "Looking for your books?" I turned around to see Rose smirking at me.

"That's none of your business." I stated.

"They are in the dumpster." Rose grinned evilly. "Too bad that they through out leftovers from last week in there.."

I ran to the dumpster and looked in to find all my books covered in food with flies everywhere.

I was being harassed once again.)

*one of those angery,beady eyed looks that anime people get* Y'know,I'm starting to wish that Kaiba would throw HER into a dumpster... Anyways,to the next chapter!

Question: Howcome Kaiba can talk? Didn't he have larengitas,however you spell it? Aw,well. Let's hope the guys can beat Super Sumo. (AKA Mark)

0_0 Um...Kaiba? Eh,sorry to wake you from your beauty sleep,but they're uh,TAKIN' YOUR GALFREIND AWAY! Cliffhangers: The reason we all live to see what happens next. I'm off to the next chapter!

I hate Rose. _ I never knew that OC characters could be so annoying! (No offence!)

Kaiba smokes? 0.o I wonder if he knows what could happen to his teeth? I've seen it before...not pretty...

I have acouple comments:

1-(Hah. I remembered her. "You the one Mokuba tried to put on fire?") Hehe! Go,Mokuba. -

2- 0_0 ROSE! SICK HER,MOKUBA!

3- JOEY! Make up your mind already! First you tell Kaiba to stay away from Serenity,then you go telling him that no one rejects her and that she's the prettiest girl in the school! Do you WANT them to start dateing or not? o_0

I hope they patch things up and BTW,ROSE MUST DIE!

~Daisy-chan

0_0...On sec... (Daisy walks off,you hear someone that sounds like Rose say," What's your problem,twerp?". Then,you hear an evil laugh. Someone ylls, "JUBILEE!" and exlposions like at a firework show are heard/seen. You also hear people that sound like Rose and her gang screaming,then Daisy comes back looking quite pleased with herself. After that,a water lily forms in her had. She puts it *into* Sakura's heart and the bumps and bruses go away.) - I feel much better now! However,I don't think I'll be able to fix the jacket,though. You'll have to tell him what happened. As for those sorry excuses for high school students,I'll take care of them. *evil look*

~Daisy-chan

oh...UPDATE!

wow, awesome! I have a yugi-oh fic that you might like lol.. it's serenity/seto... a least it will be eventually. But yah, i really like your story!

I've only seen the 1st series of Yugioh on tv and some of the manga. I went to your website and thought, "Kaiba and Shizuka do look cute together." So...i read your story (all 19 chapters straight) and i think i'm hooked. Wonderfuly story and I wanna know what happens next. _

nice work! i'm so excited to see what's going on next chappie!

NO! DONT END IT! NO!

OMG! i'm so sorry i didn't review sooner. i acctualy read it a couple dayz ago, but my account is disfunctional, and i couldnt review! i thought u quit writing the fic! i love this chappy, and the next chapter looks promising!

oy, not honda! _

finally, i've been waiting for this chapter a long time. but i guess i can let it slip because its so suspenseful D it was worth the wait?

YAY! YOU UPDATED! *hugs* Im gunna do some fanart 4 your fanfic! oh, s fun! *kills duke and honda*