Reviews for Lily Evans A History
Andellethrush chapter 56 . 6/24/2017
Update plz, very good and you lied in description it said up to when she married James. Oh, and Repario is not a spell. Please continue I hope u are not dead.
Nobody important chapter 40 . 6/23/2017
Sirius' birthday is the 3rd of November. Next time before righting a fanfic, get your facts right. Oh, and Lily hated James until 7th year which was when they finally got along, and started dating. I swear, so much of this is wrong. It should be illegal. Seriously, do your research next time.
chat55blacklabcom chapter 1 . 11/11/2016
I've always wondered how lily came into magic.
In the books, it doesn't say where she gets her
shine lots chapter 56 . 7/16/2016
So, I love your story, and realise it's probably abandoned. I was wondering if you could just post any extra snippets you have (in any unfinished form!) such as the labour/delivery of harry scene etc lying on your computer?
Best wishes,
Guest chapter 37 . 7/7/2016
I really like this book it's one of my favorites, my only concern is that Kassie seems more like the main character then Lily it that makes me mad because it is called Lily Evans a History, Kassie just gets too much attention with Sirius too and it pisses me off but I really love this story
HogwartsPrincess89 chapter 56 . 9/27/2015
This was the very first fanfiction I ever read and it was absolutely magnificent. It really draws you in, you are Lily, you feel what she feels. I can't put into words how I feel about this story. I culdn't stop reading it. Your writing is amazing!
Pureblood chapter 8 . 9/17/2015
Hermione Granger is a know-it freaky MUD-BLOOD who has no life and belongs nowhere.
Rowena Ravenclaw chapter 12 . 7/30/2015
I just LOOOOOOOOOOOVE your title Lily Evans A History it reminds me of Hogwarts A History I just wish lily hated James and James fancied lily instead of them being best friends and Sirius is hilarious
lilyangel44 chapter 2 . 4/5/2015
This is a great story! can you please tell me how long it takes for you to write one chapter?
Starswimmerlani chapter 55 . 3/2/2015
Please ignore the other comment I posted, as it was prematurely posted.

Bethany, thank you so much for bringing to life the characters I loved. Your writing is truly amazing, and I can picture everything that is happening in my mind. I can't wait to come home from school each day because I know that James, Lily, Sirius, Kassie, Madison, Peter, Christine, Daniel and all the others (yes, even Petunia) will be waiting for me. I can only hope that you will continue writing, it would mean a lot to me and many others I'm sure. Also, please tell Olivia that I said hi, we are about the same age. It would be a dream come true if you continued writing. I'm sure that if you got in touch with J.K Rowling, you could make a deal to get the story published once you finish it with the Potter characters. I know you have a lot going on in your life, but it hurts me to read the authors notes every chapter and see that you didn't finish the story. I get sad sometimes, as it leaves me hanging, but I once again go all the way back to chapter 1 again and start over. Thank you so much Bethany!
StarSwimmerLani chapter 56 . 3/2/2015
Bethany, this is a review for the entire Fanfiction. When people ask me what my favorite book is, I can always be positive that this is one of them. I think that should you be able to contact J.K Rowling, you should share this with her. I have no doubt that with a few more grammatical corrections, this could be published with flying colors. Perhaps you could work out a deal with J.K Rowling to publish this and still be allowed to use the Potter characters we all love. I have read this Fanfiction many times, and I just wanted to say, thank you so much for updating up to chapter 59! Although the 59 chapters were "stunningly" amazing, I wish you would update more and finish the story. It would mean a lot to me. When I'm at school, I can't wait to come home to re read another time, because I know that James, Lily, Kassie, Sirius, Peter, Madison, Remus
hey there chapter 56 . 1/9/2015
such a good fanfic. I've read it like five times already and I just love it. I know you probably gave up on it, since it's already 2015, but know that reading this fanfic makes my day.
Guest chapter 56 . 8/23/2014
Why did you stop? This is sooooooooo good!
Longing Reader chapter 56 . 4/19/2014
I know you dont think many people are still reading but i am and this is literally one of the best things i have ever read. Please please please continue!
s chapter 56 . 3/25/2014
please please please continue! I love it!
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