|Reviews for Countless Clouds of Violet|
| polparohoda chapter 11 . 2/4/2018
To the sceptics, I remind: Yukari's canon power is simple in effectshe manipulates boundaries, full stop. Doesn't sound like much? Any boundaries, no exception, including conceptual. That's one of the most bullshit hax powers ever invented, right here, and Taylor already figured some more esoteric tricks with it. It's deceptively simple description is the whole "I control bugs. Whoppee" crancked to eleven.
| gabe.d.clark.1997 chapter 5 . 11/30/2016
And thus Vista gained a massive headache!
| gabe.d.clark.1997 chapter 2 . 11/30/2016
So Yukari ejected her soul out into the reincarnation cycle? Or something similar?
| Faldorion chapter 11 . 5/18/2016
Well so far not bad but not good really
The biggest problem for your story is that you Strain the readers suspension of disbelief rather hard with how rusched the story feels Taylor has how long her Powers?
3 week or 5 and she is already completly changed from her core and is suddenly brilliant in outplaying people?
Another thing is that this story is only loosly based on touhou. Yes is see that you want to do a Origin story of an Alternate Gensokyo or something but simply put why ? you dismiss so much background which can be even extendet for more if you work in a little research.
That are my thoughts on the whole thing
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/6/2016
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/18/2016
Is this the beginning of gensokyo?
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/26/2016
This is like the beginning of gensokyo awesome
| Mingyu chapter 11 . 2/28/2016
Thanks! I was hoping there'd be a chapter to fill in some blanks! And this does a pretty good job of showing Taylor's thought process. Although I was hoping for more detail on how her power works. All I know about Yukari Yakumo is that she's the Youkai of Boundaries and she can manipulate them (thanks mainly to Vanishing Trooper's fic, "Be Careful What You Wish For"), so I can imagine what boundaries she tweaked to shift Oni Lee's train of thought. But details would be nice.
So it seems Taylor isn't even aware of Yuyuko's role/power? Interesting. Assuming, of course, that it's there at the moment. Maybe she has to die first? Dunno.
Oh crap! She brought in a Hakurei! Does anybody really deserve that? ...ok yeah, Wormverse. Plenty of people deserve that. This should be fun!
Anyway, looking forward to the end of this arc (and beyond). Thanks for the chapter!
| magicdownunder chapter 11 . 2/27/2016
Finished reading the level chapters~
My lack of knowledge on Touhou Project makes some segments slightly harder to enjoy - but that is my only real complaint since I'm very bias toward curb stomp stories (now I'm just hoping she gets some revenge on her former bullies).
| magicdownunder chapter 1 . 2/27/2016
Reaction towards chapter 1: Holy **** Taylor has one scary power and a messed up mind-set combined with it
I shall follow and favorite
| Syqadelic chapter 1 . 2/26/2016
The POV switch between chapters is a little disorienting. Maybe add "[person's] POV" at the top of the page?
| xxxrae97xxx chapter 11 . 2/25/2016
Noice. keep up the good work m8
| with an m16 chapter 11 . 2/25/2016
A summary chapter I really don't know what to think about this one. on one hand it is nice to see Taylors point of view on everything that has happened in the previous chapters. ranging from bringing down E88 to her dad meeting Yuyuko...actually her view of that was hilarious. It does a good job at explaining her view of what happened and in some cases how it happened, I sometimes find that the how often eludes people so receiving an explanation for everything is nice.
The issue with this is length. up until the last three or so points in this chapter they were detailed enough to explain thoughts and actions that occurred. the Bank scene could have fitted a more interesting discussion given tattletales ability to well lets just say percive things and somewhat understand it as opposed to just a few instant agreements.
the last part involving the Hakurei interesting for sure but a little shoehorned in not fitting in with the rest of this chapter.
it is still well written and I do look forward to the next chapter
| Indecisive Bob chapter 11 . 2/25/2016
Nice chapter! And here is the beginnings of Gensokyo. Since there don't seem to be any youkai hanging around, I'm assuming Taylor is going to be inviting Capes, family, and friends? Keep up the good work!
| Iceflame55 chapter 11 . 2/25/2016
Oh my lord, she's going to create a Parahuman version of Touhou's Youkai dimension, isn't she?