Reviews for Countless Clouds of Violet
moon so bright chapter 11 . 2/25/2016
Greatazuredragon chapter 11 . 2/25/2016
Nice chapter, good work.
Malhavoc Shadowlord chapter 10 . 2/15/2016
I have no goddamn idea what I just read, but I know I want more of it! Touhou/Worm works together frighteningly well. Both involve fantastical bullshit powers and silly looking outfits.
Caladbolg chapter 10 . 2/11/2016
Hah, even if the writing is a little rough, I like this story. It's fun. I like that you're playing a bit fast and loose with all the various elements of the two 'verses - I imagine that keeps you from getting bogged down.

I don't know if you have any plans for Ran Yakumo, but I was thinking about parallels and realized something. Lisa would make an excellent Ran-analogue. Even ignoring the fact that she's commonly described with fox traits, she's a thinker. From a certain standpoint, thinkers seem to function kind of like human computers that can only run one program. In her case, the program is 'Intuition'. Well, shikigami are described as being Gensoukyou's equivalent of computers, so some parallels could easily be drawn in that regard ...?

And of course, if Lisa is Ran, then Dinah is Chen.

Well, this was my thought. Make of it what you will! Whatever you do, keep up the good work.

(I just realized that Brian would make a hilarious Rumia-analogue.)
Mingyu chapter 10 . 2/10/2016
Haaaaaah. Dunno, I'm pretty sure Yuyuko is remarkable. Lisa should trade in her power. It's getting defective.

However, I suppose it's somewhat understandable with her current personal boogeyman right next to her. I've been looking forward to this! Now to find out what Taylor's views on the "smaller" villains are! Stuff like: can she be sympathetic to people forced into villainy? Or will she handle the punishment herself or leave the PRT something to do?

In any case, hopefully Lisa at least manages to focus Taylor's gaze in Coil's direction next. It would save Dinah some grief.

...Also, did Taylor really just trap Lung to use in future (probably Endbringer) some sort of Gap Pokemon? *snerk* I'm ok with this.

Thanks for the chapter!
xxxrae97xxx chapter 10 . 2/10/2016
Oh shit. great chapter man, sorta felt something like this would happen. Keep up the good work!
Berserker chapter 10 . 2/10/2016
This is could turn out to be one the most awkward bank robberies in the history of banks.
Greatazuredragon chapter 10 . 2/10/2016
Hehe poor Lisa... ;p
Nice work.
Lextfy chapter 7 . 2/7/2016
xxxrae97xxx chapter 9 . 2/9/2016
Shit man. This is looking good. Keep up the good work!
Greatazuredragon chapter 9 . 2/9/2016
Nice chapter, good work, I would keep it.
Indecisive Bob chapter 9 . 2/9/2016
Nice chapter! I really don't mind these PHO chapters in stories. Sure, they're not as satisfying and full chapters, but it's a nice way to stealthily give the readers general information without having to resort to info dumps. Keep up the good work!
Mingyu chapter 9 . 2/9/2016
Ah, Greg. Once again you have proven your ignorance and lack of common sense to the online world. Whatever would we do without you.

Eh, why not keep it? At the very least it builds the world a bit. Especially if Tattletale's decision becomes important soon. Although the big question is how Taylor knows Lisa is searching the forums (she could be posting, but nothing is shown here). It's creepy and all, but I hope there's an explanation of how/who/why sometime in the future.

Thanks for the...kind of a chapter!
with an m16 chapter 8 . 2/8/2016
lets see ghost runs essentially some kinda afterlife

minimum 1000 years of existence factoring for worm

taking the image of Yuyuko eating and multiplying it by cancer since Danny may not be able to afford her appetite
I ship it

also Larger distance, hell of an understatement.

ok more serious side of review.

the Dinner does work and the introduction of Yuyuko is well placed.

I think this is the break from darkness that was needed after combat, Danny going through a crisis and clockblocker screaming...actually that last one I would have paid to hear voice acted.

But it does ease provide a good jumping point for the next chapter, and I look forward to seeing where the introduction of the queen of ghosts goes to.
Mingyu chapter 8 . 2/8/2016
Nope. Looks like the Empire went down without doing anything significant. Meh, foregone conclusion anyway.

This though! Good to see Danny getting back in touch with Taylor. And hey, if you have gaps, why not travel to Japan for lunch. Nice touch. Should be interesting to see how this lunch goes. And why Yuyuko is here. Maybe we'll finally get some answers as to why Taylor got Yukari's powers...although I'm not sure straight answers are a part of her power set. Hah!

Also, it wasn't too confusing, but the sentence with 'I had gotten his daughter back' made it a bit hard to pin down that it was Danny's POV. Replace 'his' with 'my' and it makes more sense.

Anyway, thanks for the chapter!
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