|Reviews for Broken Hope|
| PINKMOON25 chapter 29 . 11/16
PLEASE CONTINUEE I LOVE YOUR STORIES.
| Dj Shadowthehedgehog0201 chapter 29 . 12/27/2014
Good story but...NO ENDING!? I mean cmon it woild hav been soooo much better if u had finished the story
| Darkness chapter 22 . 12/15/2014
It was really awesome but kinda... Fell away at the end.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
PLUS YOU LITTLE THING I LOVE YOUR SHIT SITE
| Guest chapter 26 . 10/21/2013
Where the hell are you finish the damn story dumbass
| Alicia the wolf chapter 16 . 11/9/2012
Y did u leave shadow y
| Alicia the wolf chapter 11 . 11/8/2012
They finnaly met
| Alicia the wolf chapter 2 . 11/8/2012
Oh-uh christmass is 1 month away I cant wait especially when there are Mizltoes
| nik chapter 29 . 7/24/2012
Update soon. I have an oc u might like.
colors: lavender body with violet hair w/t lavender highlights. peach belly and muzzle.
eye color:crusted amber
personalty:funny and talktive
cloths: usualy wears shortie tops and blue jean shorts or wrist length gloves with golden cuff similar to tikals.
age:around16-17 years old.
powers:can read minds and can shape shift
i hope u hav a use for her!update soon!
been there done that,
| Dame Cate chapter 29 . 12/8/2011
oh i love this! can't wait for the finale!
| Samantha chapter 29 . 10/13/2010
What is wrong with you!
The story is great so far but it's to long and moves slow.
I hope the end gets out soon though! sigh
Sorry about before!
I was thinking that mabe you could get it to move faster in the next chapters if you have them! Also mabe you could explain I don't get what happened to Blizzard very well!
| Shadamluvr2010 chapter 29 . 6/1/2010
Okay I just started reading this but why are u making
cliffhangers I want to read more plz
it would be awesome If u finished the story
| just call me superchickrocs1 chapter 10 . 5/16/2010
hey its pyroclastic flow okay just telling ya and this is a great story
| Lord Kelvin chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
Went my heart upon seeing this story once more. You know, were it not for you almost six years ago, I'd have never gotten into writing. I wouldn't have met legions of splendid people on this domain either.
Nostalgia is a strong feeling. I've found your story on one of those red and black Shadow fan sites. Twenty-seven chapters in total. I've printed them out. It was difficult to read black text on a crimson background. Moreover, it was difficult to read incredibly amusing creative writing that way. And I wanted to get as much of the literary action as possible. You've had an email on that tiny site, and redirected me to FFN. Two more chapters...an eternal delay.
I don't know if this message reaches anyone at all, but it's something I feel I owe you. No thank you can express the gratitude. From a mediocre English user with a silly liking for Sonic the Hedgehog, to a renowned critic on Fan Fiction dot Net. Six years is a lot of time in a person's life. Though, I'm quite happy the way I spent mine.
And I'm happy You inspired me to. Thank you. Sincerest wishes for with your career and personal life.
Have a nice, abuse-free day.
| lolitawork libretto chapter 29 . 10/26/2008
OH MY GOSH.
YOU LEFT THERE STORY THERE? OF ALL PLACES.