Reviews for Black to Blue
Kkcats chapter 23 . 11/21/2020
Great job
I love it
heartwarming.
ColonelJayWrites chapter 1 . 7/29/2020
Those last lines made me shiver. Man, that's depressing.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2020
Yikes forever
EchoTheHybrid chapter 23 . 5/7/2020
I loved this story! though i would like to see everyone's reactions to finding out about chara...
ColonelJay chapter 23 . 12/18/2019
Powerful and awe-inspiring. The perfect ingredients to bake a ca-er... Story...!

Anyways, just. Wow. Absolutely beautiful! There were no noticeable grammatical errors, (and the ones found aren't anything too big) and the way you handle your characters just make me smile. You also managed to make a happy ending NOT cringey, which is something a few authors have a habit of doing, so good job! Pat yourself in the back!

11/10
Starfall chapter 23 . 12/1/2019
Nice
ToastedChef chapter 1 . 9/27/2019
its pretty good
Ideatron chapter 23 . 8/7/2019
I love this so much! It was created beautifully and had a bootyful plot.
NBoss01 chapter 14 . 2/17/2019
*TW*

Okay... I want to address the Q&A Frisk and Chara had...
The part concerning gender...
I maybe can believe Chara's response for non-binary, Maybe. With such a diverse place such as the underground Chara could of picked it up while being down there.
But Frisk..
Considering the garbage parents Frisk had and time period and environment frisk grew up, I see it as HIGHLY unlikely that Frisk would give the response of not "knowing" what to say back when asked if Frisk was a boy or a Girl. Frisk would be going off of one set of information for a kid that age and that would be whats in their pants...
You could of just kept it ambiguous like the game and it would of been much better.
NBoss01 chapter 23 . 2/17/2019
I am really happy with the aspects of this plot! Ever since I saw the ending for the pacifist route and saw that you could stay with Toriel after everything I was deeply confused. The fact that Frisk was so persistent in leaving the underground just to stay with Toriel in the end really confused me. This fic gave a reason why Frisk would of left Toriel and make it to Asgore and to stay with her in the end.

The connection you built with Chara, Asriel and Frisk was quite touching. The development of Chara and Frisk's was especially good, I love how you slowly built the interactions up over the chapters and increased their relationship.

Something that was major but I didn't understand was why Chara would do the genocide route if she wasn't influenced by Frisk or the player, its like she just did it and that I really don't understand.

Overall your story sat pretty well with me, except for that small point, and I'll be looking out for more from you.
CaptScarletBlood chapter 1 . 2/2/2019
Wonderfully written! I heard of Undertale a couple years ago from my stepdaughter and now my 9 year old is playing. Thank you for this awesome story
NBoss01 chapter 5 . 1/18/2019
You shouldn't care if your fic isn cannon. Its a fic!
CureCaligraphy chapter 4 . 12/5/2018
I want to punch Frisk's parents and then give them an apartment and a stable income
Lunar Moon Butterfly chapter 23 . 10/6/2018
This. This is what amazing looks like!
ChoccyCream chapter 3 . 9/15/2018
Shouldn't Sans understand sign language since faster does it kinda
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