Reviews for White Wyvern
RyuugiAzuma chapter 11 . 12/3/2019
I love it. I love it I love it I love it.
It's amazing.
Wonderful story.
I love it.
mieudiary chapter 11 . 6/29/2017
After thousand years they finally kissed /wipes tear my babies
As long as you want to continue, I'm always looking forward to your writing! 3
NekoSan20196 chapter 11 . 6/29/2017
it's so sweet, so nice! I love this story and I hope you gain the inspiration again. we love it!
Champion of Justice chapter 9 . 3/15/2017
Great chapter. I can't wait for Germania's talk with Alfred. Hehehehe.
mieudiary chapter 9 . 3/11/2017
this is like IT IS TIME TO TALK ABOUT THE BIRD AND THE BEE LMFAO
I love the volcano twist so much aahh it is so freaking cool and I have never seen anything like that before 3 Can't wait for the next update muwahahaha
AnotherGuest chapter 8 . 1/23/2017
It was a true pleasure reading this chapter! Specially the interaction between Alfred and Gilbert. god it was so cute. And we get a closer glimpse about what dragons can do! I was actually curious about how they were going to lift the curse and was very satisfied with how the scene was written. Hopefully, we'll get to read more from you soon!
mieudiary chapter 8 . 1/13/2017
Uwaaah that was some rare romance moments between them aaahgg so sweet /
It is a miracle that Eliz didn't shoot Al off at the point since he technically is' zombie' lmfaaoo it must be just me to feel this chapter was short hnnnn Im looking forward the next update aaahh
Champion of Justice chapter 7 . 12/2/2016
Good chapter. I can't wait to read the next one. It's so exciting.
AnotherGuest chapter 6 . 10/20/2016
Ahhhh an update! :D
I specially loved how Gilbert and Alfred's relationship has evolved now that he's in the den. It was also nice to see another side of Germania's personality. You have me waiting expectantly for the next chapter. Hope to hear from you soon!
sakerat chapter 6 . 10/20/2016
So happy this updated. I was vibrating with excitement...awesome.
AnotherGuest chapter 5 . 8/5/2016
Wow, the story advanced so much in this chapter. I'm excited to see what happens next! Great story as always.
sakerat chapter 5 . 8/2/2016
Awesome
mieudiary chapter 5 . 8/1/2016
New update finallyyyy aahh
Review review
There is a lot of info here, making things a bit of bland out, like, they talk talk, do do then talk talk. Which is understandable because it is hard to explain the AU setting without being a bit documentary.
Alfred seemed a bit oblivious to Gilbert's wound, or lacked of description on his reaction and action (like when Gil rested against Alfred's shoulder, it was endearing but didnt get Al's reaction?)
So in deep, things are described pretty vague here, maybe some details about their current enviroment would be nice, the bird and the bee the tentacles okno/slAPPED
anyhow, the info showed to be such a great one so far. I cant wait to see what's more to be revealed!
Anotherguest chapter 4 . 6/12/2016
Hey there, you're doing very well with this story: it flows, is always interesting and it is easy to understand! As always I love your writing, and
I hope the next chapters are easier for you to write.
mieudiary chapter 4 . 6/8/2016
AHUHUUHU Finally some actions of them together and it's getting more thrilling now. I can't wait for the new update a;sdka;lskds;alkd
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