Reviews for White Wyvern |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love it. I love it I love it I love it. It's amazing. Wonderful story. I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() After thousand years they finally kissed /wipes tear my babies As long as you want to continue, I'm always looking forward to your writing! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's so sweet, so nice! I love this story and I hope you gain the inspiration again. we love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. I can't wait for Germania's talk with Alfred. Hehehehe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is like IT IS TIME TO TALK ABOUT THE BIRD AND THE BEE LMFAO I love the volcano twist so much aahh it is so freaking cool and I have never seen anything like that before 3 Can't wait for the next update muwahahaha |
![]() ![]() It was a true pleasure reading this chapter! Specially the interaction between Alfred and Gilbert. god it was so cute. And we get a closer glimpse about what dragons can do! I was actually curious about how they were going to lift the curse and was very satisfied with how the scene was written. Hopefully, we'll get to read more from you soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uwaaah that was some rare romance moments between them aaahgg so sweet / It is a miracle that Eliz didn't shoot Al off at the point since he technically is' zombie' lmfaaoo it must be just me to feel this chapter was short hnnnn Im looking forward the next update aaahh |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. I can't wait to read the next one. It's so exciting. |
![]() ![]() Ahhhh an update! :D I specially loved how Gilbert and Alfred's relationship has evolved now that he's in the den. It was also nice to see another side of Germania's personality. You have me waiting expectantly for the next chapter. Hope to hear from you soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So happy this updated. I was vibrating with excitement...awesome. |
![]() ![]() Wow, the story advanced so much in this chapter. I'm excited to see what happens next! Great story as always. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() New update finallyyyy aahh Review review There is a lot of info here, making things a bit of bland out, like, they talk talk, do do then talk talk. Which is understandable because it is hard to explain the AU setting without being a bit documentary. Alfred seemed a bit oblivious to Gilbert's wound, or lacked of description on his reaction and action (like when Gil rested against Alfred's shoulder, it was endearing but didnt get Al's reaction?) So in deep, things are described pretty vague here, maybe some details about their current enviroment would be nice, the bird and the bee the tentacles okno/slAPPED anyhow, the info showed to be such a great one so far. I cant wait to see what's more to be revealed! |
![]() ![]() Hey there, you're doing very well with this story: it flows, is always interesting and it is easy to understand! As always I love your writing, and I hope the next chapters are easier for you to write. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AHUHUUHU Finally some actions of them together and it's getting more thrilling now. I can't wait for the new update a;sdka;lskds;alkd |