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Eh harry is shirou so idk why he’s getting UBW

Oh harry always you make such poor decisions

To be honest canon Artoria wouldn't lose an argument with Harry.
Did you know the shit that she did in life?
There is a reason why fans(actual fans that know the lore)say that Artoria did nothing wrong,because they are right.
Also,Artoria in Fate/Stay Night isn't against dishonorable tactics if necessary,she tried to use a surprise attack against Kuzuki.
Artoria in Fate/Zero isn't Artoria,there is a reason why they call Urobuchi Urobutcher,because he butchered her characterization.
The personality of Leonidas looked different from his fate counterpart,but it seems acceptable.

I have to say, you are aware that unlimited blade work have no connection Avalon and that Shirou got it as his noble Phantasm because of the fire and how his own mental was affected by it, right? The fact that somehow Harry is slowy getting Unlimited Bladework as an Reality Marble is just cheap.

And now I get to the end and see "updated 2017" at the top
ah well, it was good while it lasted
Maybe you can get some inspiration once the next book comes out July 2014

"I'll even bringing popcorn."
Minor typo here, should add "be" or remove the ing
And it's interesting how he didn't say he'd *try* to make her a body, just that he would make her a body.
Hm
I suppose *he* never specified flesh/blood, that was all her, but that's probably just semantics
I wonder how much the spirits of intellect talk/hang out.
They both have things they can learn from each other, what with Bob's bobishness and her inherited fallen angel knowledge
Regardless I am enjoying this.

Hmm signing a magical contract just before introducing Medea hmm
Also she very much seems different as a rider class servant
Hm regardless that was a fun intro for her

I must say that you definitely have succeeded in matching the tone of the writing as you've said is your goal.
And seeing Saber get flustered was adorable

Oh nice. Bezerker Cu,
I've always figured that cu was strongest as caster or bezerker, and lancer was sort of his weaker middle ground, warp spasm speed and heeling on top of mad enhancement and possible rune magic enhancements if he has the time and the care to plan ahead is nothing to sneeze at. Hm we might even see archer Hercules... hm I'm really curious who the other players are
Nic obviously has at least one someone. Probably marcone or someone on his payroll too, maybe Lara or someone else from the white court... maybe a black court vamp too, and that still leaves three empty spots,
Regardless I just finished the book series up to this point and I've had this in my "to read later" list for ages
I'm very excited to read this

Love the story. Hope to see an update when you can. Take care :)

I am glad I found this story, even if you don't continue, it was an enjoyable read. It's not quite Butcher, but you capture the style very close, better then most by far.

I also enjoy the way you blended the Grail War and Dresden setting.

The Saber/Harry moment with Mordred was great, and hope if you continue the story it gets touched on more.

Again thanks for the read.

i hope you update this i really enjoy it

Please continue the story