well i think you should but more romance and drama in the story about Orphen and Cleo in love and in fights that what i think you should do

Me encantó! I really loved it, why you didn't continue? It's great! Ojalá, a pesar de como nueve años sin publicar, te acuerdes y subas la nueva historia. I'm waiting for it!

I love this story, and its my favorite!
write more

nice fic!

i hope you update the next storyline! :D

Can't wait for part two. :D

Can people sneeze while sleeping?

Aww, what a cute couple. The end of this chapter, in reference to Kevin's outlook on Orphen's band and Cleo's jewelry, had me laughing.

Oh, no! Are they getting a cold? They need some major cough medicine for those coughs.

Ha ha ha, Orphen Angel, The Sorcerer! XD

Interesting...

Cleo can cook!

What the crap, Orphen! How is that thought logical?

:O

A proper kiss...?

Ha ha ha. School de Orphen. :D

It's one thing to dream about yourself with the love of your life. It's another thing when your friend, Magic, dreams the exact same thing and his only wish is for it to come true. What kind of dream has Magic been having when it comes to Orphen and Cleo? Is it PG-13 or MA? ;P

This chapter Orphen is getting jealous. Is Kevin starting to have feelings for Cleo? I don't know. Let me find out in the next chapter.