Reviews for A Love too long unconfessed
judy harrington chapter 13 . 11/18/2014
well i think you should but more romance and drama in the story about Orphen and Cleo in love and in fights that what i think you should do
Luna.gatuna chapter 14 . 11/28/2013
Me encantó! I really loved it, why you didn't continue? It's great! Ojalá, a pesar de como nueve años sin publicar, te acuerdes y subas la nueva historia. I'm waiting for it!
Ruby chapter 14 . 6/25/2013
I love this story, and its my favorite!
write more
satomika chapter 14 . 2/21/2013
nice fic!

i hope you update the next storyline! :D
Darkrini chapter 14 . 10/7/2012
Can't wait for part two. :D
Darkrini chapter 13 . 10/7/2012
Can people sneeze while sleeping?

Aww, what a cute couple. The end of this chapter, in reference to Kevin's outlook on Orphen's band and Cleo's jewelry, had me laughing.
Darkrini chapter 12 . 10/7/2012
Oh, no! Are they getting a cold? They need some major cough medicine for those coughs.
Darkrini chapter 11 . 10/7/2012
Ha ha ha, Orphen Angel, The Sorcerer! XD
Darkrini chapter 10 . 10/7/2012
Interesting...
Darkrini chapter 9 . 10/7/2012
Cleo can cook!
Darkrini chapter 8 . 10/7/2012
What the crap, Orphen! How is that thought logical?
Darkrini chapter 7 . 10/7/2012
:O

A proper kiss...?
Darkrini chapter 6 . 10/7/2012
Ha ha ha. School de Orphen. :D
Darkrini chapter 5 . 10/7/2012
It's one thing to dream about yourself with the love of your life. It's another thing when your friend, Magic, dreams the exact same thing and his only wish is for it to come true. What kind of dream has Magic been having when it comes to Orphen and Cleo? Is it PG-13 or MA? ;P
Darkrini chapter 4 . 10/7/2012
This chapter Orphen is getting jealous. Is Kevin starting to have feelings for Cleo? I don't know. Let me find out in the next chapter.
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