Reviews for Lily Potter and the Witches of Salem |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cute~ |
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![]() ![]() ![]() no. fuck you. this is just bad writing youve made the main character an incompetent retard. she has NO redeeming qualities, shes a useless bimbo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is fucking awful. you suck at writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story isnt badly written, but its a fuckin HORRIBLE harry potter fanfic. the characters are so OOC its ridiculous, to the extent i dont think you know anything about them other than their names. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so lily is both stupid AND incompetent as fuck at fighting? did you seriously make the main character a useless bimbo? ...fuckin WHY? |
![]() ![]() ![]() the stories gotta rip off the monogamy bandaid, its holding the story back. im all good with a nice ol' monogamous relationship, but you do NOT make a setting like this just for there to be only one pairing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it takes some next level audacity to be face to face with someone who saved the world (or at the very least a few countries) and just start spouting racial slurs to their girlfriend. like what the fuck was her endgame there? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its supposed to be mione not the disgusting herm or whatever. It sounds like a guy name |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oof, wasn't aware this would be a pure porn fantasy fic lol. Though judging by the reviews I'm apparently going out of the norm by seeing a fic I'm not interested in and *reads notes* not continuing to read it instead of leaving overly aggressive reviews. |
![]() ![]() This story has been a great read, I wish you'd come back and write more :(. Reviews are entertaining as well. Lots of retards and incels in the comments who are probably the type of people to leave a negative review in amazon because they bought the wrong item. Don't like this completely free story you can always click away from? Then don't read it bitch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() idk, suspension of disbelief is right out the window w/ the skimpy outfits (sounds like a black leather version of Princess Leia's slave outfit). Can't really see any organization, even a brothel, going this far for regular outfits. Maybe if the school were in on a sweltering tropical island, but Massachusetts? gonna freeze their tiny tits off even in summer some days. It really makes the whole thing seem like nothing more than a sketchy porn fantasy. |
![]() ![]() well clearly you're a moron. especially with the last bit. |
![]() ![]() I’m no Wizard… nor a Witch… but perhaps "Lily Potter and the Witches of Salem" is a far more 'innocent' title than "Harry Potter and the Half-Black Chick" By: Peter Griffin… |