that was an intense close call. cool way to get around the bite/change part of treaty. Good story thanks for sharing.

not yet half?

so close, but so far.

Bella? already?

Alice! gives him something more to think about and hope for.

Your descriptions are amazing. Edward's thoughts and feelings as reading 'visitors'. This story is wonderfully different.

That explains how he got there. Now how Bella broke through to release him?

Someone mentioned this on Twilight Fan Fiction Finders group. Interesting start.

This is beautifully written in such a intricate, poetic way. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Thank you so much for writing this, you are very talented.

So heartbreaking for Edward and the family. 157 years is still a long time to be a prisoner, even if you’re a vampire. Edward will spend a lot of time torturing himself in his mind. Very sad for the Quiluete woman, too, who lost her life by being in the wrong place at the wrong time.

Wow. That was a literary masterpiece! I am humbled and awed at the beauty of the prose. Thank you for gracing us with your immense talent.

I’ve read many a fic, maybe too many ;)
This was amazing! Love, love, love it.

Great writing! An amazing story and your sentences evoke wonderful images.

Wow. Thank you for your story. Beautifully written with so many emotions and very unique. It was such a pleasure to read it, you really reinvented Twilight. I already want to read it again and again.

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