|Reviews for Monolith|
| MyladyNancy chapter 12 . 9/22
absolutely loved this presentation of the characters. wow
| Nicoconsd chapter 12 . 6/29
Wow, I can't tell you how much I have loved this story from start to finish. What a wonderful agonizing (in the best of ways) tale. I don't want it to end. Thank you for this wonder journey I have loved each and every chapter. :)
| Nicoconsd chapter 4 . 6/29
This story is just so sad... I mean I know Edward killed but to be tortured like he is I can't even imagine. You just want to reach into your computer and give him a hug. I am also desperate to know that once we get back to Bella's time did he kill her? Or will he realize she is his mate.
| SuperAsh chapter 12 . 5/23
Wow wow wow! I've only just discovered this story and have been reading obsessively, now suddenly it's complete. What a fantastic AU this is, your characters have such a rich feeling to them. I was feeling the draw that Bella felt and the the calling Edward felt with his singer. The way that Alice found a loophole in the treaty was perfect, and how she caught Edward up on all he missed too! Thank you for sharing this delicious story 3
| helenemc chapter 11 . 4/7
Sorry for inadvertently posting an incomplete review. Sometimes my fingers have a will of their own. What an amazing story! Very well written with an interesting and engrossing plot. Thank you for sharing your talent.
| helenemc chapter 12 . 4/7
What an unusual
| davysekhon chapter 12 . 4/7
It was truly a remarkable story with a very interesting and creative plot. I really loved reading it and am glad to see them together. I have always loved stories where ExB are together and portrayed as a strong, passionate and mature couple. Thank you for such a beautiful story.
| Pixie's Mama chapter 12 . 12/29/2016
Reaching the end of an amazing story is a bittersweet thing as well.
What a way for Alice to catch Edward up to speed. And all the work done to Edward's room to eliminate any feeling of enclosure... That was so sweet and thoughtful!
Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful gem with the world.
I wish you all the best in the coming 2017!
| Pixie's Mama chapter 11 . 12/29/2016
Ooo... A throwback to Edward's last hunt before his imprisonment!
Wow! What a force of nature is this Alice!
Isabella's blood is spilled all over the ground. What will William do when he happens to check on the monolith that is all over the place?
| Pixie's Mama chapter 10 . 12/29/2016
Such vibrant colors, rich scents, and consuming emotions clashing against each other... What a way to go...
| Pixie's Mama chapter 9 . 12/28/2016
It is supposed to be rather random and saddening, but I burst into chortles at "Gosh, this is just filthy. When was the last time you had a bath? Never mind. I've seen the dates." And then I can't help but smile and smile at Edward basking in the flood of words and music from his mysterious singer.
What is this about the stone beneath Edward's feet shifting? Is it an earthquake?
Hmmm... The touches are shifting... The sounds and sensations are getting complicated...
| Pixie's Mama chapter 8 . 12/28/2016
Ahhh... Serenading his singer... A desperate, ravenous, thirsty Edward...
| Pixie's Mama chapter 7 . 12/28/2016
This hurts. It hurts. My heart hurts along with Edward...
How often it is that we have to lose something to realize the fact that we crave it with the very fibre of our being...
| Pixie's Mama chapter 6 . 12/28/2016
A collage of images-a slowing pendulum, a graying Edward, a towering ancient fir, fluttering pieces of a dream-flows into my mind at the beginning of this chapter; then, a mental impression of muted sounds and movements going around Edward, coming to a halt in the form of a quiet sigh right in front. What a contrast!
"I want. So much. To consume him." Oh. My. Gosh! This makes me quiver!
| Pixie's Mama chapter 5 . 12/28/2016
An elaborate hoax it is, just not one that William suspects it to be...