Reviews for Monolith
rmcrms5 chapter 12 . 8/1/2016
Beautiful story!
rmcrms5 chapter 4 . 8/1/2016
Interesting how the generations bring him a step closer to Bella. I love it!
rmcrms5 chapter 1 . 8/1/2016
Holy freaking cow! This was amazing! Loved! Loved! Loved it!
k02061jgmail.co chapter 12 . 8/1/2016
Just absolutely lovely! I loved reading it, even the anguish!
k02061jgmail.com chapter 11 . 8/1/2016
So it takes Jasper and Carlisle to change Bella. I'm okay with that, since Edward would have botched the job! I'll bet Alice gets him squared away before too long!
k02061jgmail.com chapter 10 . 8/1/2016
What in the world made him think it was supposed to be any other way but this?
k02061jgmail.com chapter 9 . 8/1/2016
Hang on just a little longer, Edward, rescue is coming soon!
k02061jgmail.com chapter 8 . 8/1/2016
Makes me want to tell him, have faith Edward, she will be back!
k02061jgmail.com chapter 7 . 8/1/2016
Poor Edward, I feel so sorry for his pain!
k02061jgmail.com chapter 6 . 8/1/2016
Thank heaven she has finally found him!
k02061jgmail.com chapter 5 . 8/1/2016
Marvelous! I haven't figured out who the messenger was, but she must know the future since she counseled patience. I'm glad she left him the memories or whatever they were!
k02061jgmail.com chapter 4 . 8/1/2016
His narration makes this sound, truly, like purgatory! Describing the song he hears from the Swan boy, I'm guessing it's a family trait, passed down to Bella, eventually.
k02061jgmail.com chapter 3 . 8/1/2016
Emmett provides the chains and post to bind him, and Esme carves the monolith that is his prison. Carlisle just mourns his first son. Pretty sad, but somehow just and proper.
k02061jgmail.com chapter 2 . 8/1/2016
I can't doubt his sincerity, but his brother has a point, too. Seems pretty complex, to me and I hope he finds an answer.
k02061jgmail.com chapter 1 . 8/1/2016
About half to two thirds of the way through, I began to suspect the truth! Loved the one-shot, but am eager to read the continuation!
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