It's been over a year since anything has been posted I do believe, when will this re-edited and rewritten story appear?

Wow, this is absolutely incredible . The amount of detail and creativity here really stands out. I can tell you’ve put a lot of thought into everything from the character design and expressions to the overall composition and mood . It’s not just visually striking but also tells a story, which is something I really admire .

The way you’ve captured emotion, movement, and personality in your work is honestly next-level. It’s always inspiring to see creators who are so passionate about what they do. That passion really shows in every line and color choice. Whether this is part of a bigger project or just a standalone idea, it truly deserves more attention. Keep creating and sharing more. This kind of work adds so much to the creative community.

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The world as it currently exists doesn't deserve to be save. It needs to be destroyed and rebuilt. That means destroying governments executing traders who are selfserving. Here in the States the government keeps getting worse. And the idiots keep voting in more and more corrupt individuals and to damned blind to see it. And those of us who see and and keep warning people who tumes than not refuse to listen and learn and keep voting in the corrupt. And many ifvour politicians forget their oaths and the consequences for breaking them.

As for this chapter And a suggestion for future chapters I think the Magical Community needs to learn where Albus was sent at his death for his Crimes and Sins against the Potters and them Sirius and Remus and his selfserving plans that are criminal and those who went Al ng with them which results in Ginny And Ron losing their lives. And Draco along with Crab and Goyal Parkinson resulting in them and their Families the going extinct. Anyway show the part of the after
life in which the and Albus were sent. Were the unrepresented are sent. And who's crimes are to great.

And I have seen plenty of Fanfiction stories and hints in Canon Where Albus rejects The Almighty and even all of the lower the gods and goddesses. And quite few showed Albus being thrown into Tartarus in Hades. Before he is to be thrown into the lake of fire which was originally ment for the fallen Angels and their demonic brats. That is were they are to be fully destroyed where their is nothing left of them. The second death which is perminate.

Holy hell this is cringe, you're better off using chatgpt man

Harry's an overdramatic pussy, calm the fuck down you sissy

Talk about imminent trouble…

That was hard on Harry…

That happened…

Talk about a casualty avoided, and trouble brewing…

Oof, talk about family problems…

Well… that’s an unexpected development…

This is just so cringe, it's teeth grinding.

Author~Sama this story is amazing and I can't wait to see if you make a sequel or add to this one

i look forwards to the complete rewrite and eventual continuation. this is an interesting take on the "Loki is Harry's father" idea.

i have read a few, some are good, others are terrible.

this one... has potential. but obviously it needs some work. which you are already doing.

so i eagerly await how this fic develops, and what new direction you intend to take the plot in.

like this one. will the rewrite take this spot or get its own?
and what chaos will Helena cause with Dark World & beyond?
still good story, happy 2024